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Shocked as he was, he struggled gasping for breath and clutching his heart….until he lay drenched in a pool of his own blood.
Then he breathed his last with his eyes staring in anger towards her vengeful face.
After years of suffering, she could finally heave a sigh of relief and be happy as she swiped clean the bloody dagger.
He was a selfish rogue. He didn't give her what was due to her. All he did was to try in vain to take advantage of her subordinate position. But she never gave in.
He thought one day she will fall in his trap and tried his trick. But she was smarter than he knew and she could keep him at bay. The dirty old wretch actually deserved more than what she did.
If only it was needed to plunge that dagger as many times as she wanted, she would have happily done it. But the initial plunge itself was enough to take the devil’s life. Her anger had not subsided and she was not satisfied.
She now sat in a cozy corner in a private coffee nook sipping her hot coffee as she recollected that fateful day with that devil.
Finally, it is time for her to celebrate!
The eagerly awaited end of a fiend had come.
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wow... that was quite precise and brutal. good one.
ReplyDeleteO wow... a very genuine reason to celebrate... :) Let the celebration continues... :)
ReplyDeleteoh my god
ReplyDeleteBrutal celebrations... nicely penned!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Muthu...:-) I wish it were real :(
ReplyDeleteYes Aayu...why not celebrate? Let's celebrate! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, OMG Tanaya! Thanks ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Neha...will be reading your take too! :-)
ReplyDeletewhat a celebration! Loved it Mom.. :)
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
oh wow...what a take...surely a reason to celebrate
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT :)
Oh! that was bloodcurdling!! What a revenge.
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Goodness me....there's every reason to celebrate! Neat n crisp one. Loved this!
ReplyDeleteVictory over the Devil indeed calls for celebration... ATB for BAT:)
ReplyDeleteThanks SiS!
ReplyDeleteYeah you are right Karan...really a reason to celebrate and why not? Thanks and I wish you all the best too!!!
ReplyDeleteYeah right Sayantini! Thanks...:-) sure will visit your blog :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Panchali! Glad you loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteThat's true Reshma...just a figment of my imagination anyway...am not gonna do it in real...:D
ReplyDeleteThanks!!! ATB for BAT 33 too!
Unfolded a very gripping tale illustrating a true celebration! Triumph!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT :)
WelCome Back. Brutal murder. The police must be on her trail now.
ReplyDeleteI read that fiend as friend first.
ReplyDeleteSurprisingly, it added a flavor.
"But she never gave in."
ReplyDeleteAnd also:
"He thought one day she will fall in his trap and tried his trick. But she was smarter than he knew and she could keep him at bay"
Well, then what was the need to kill? Failed to understand the subtle flow in the story :-(
She needed to kill him because...ouch this is a real story...i don't wanna mess myself...sorry Aativas, i can't answer you...:(
ReplyDeleteOh Amity I've always said you were an excellent writer and once again, you've proved me right!!! Love Di ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Megha...yes it is a celebration for me...:-)
ReplyDeleteStill scot free...:P Thanks Vitthal...;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Di...:-) such a heartwarming comment from you!
ReplyDeleteNicely narrated ... But what was the need to kill ...
ReplyDeleteHi Amity! Well, well, well...this cannot be a coincidence...is it? ;)
ReplyDeleteDon't tell me that she works in politics. Anyway, vengeance takes years to plan and implement otherwise it doesn't work. Like the Japanese say "Vengeance is a stony path" and emotions cannot be in it.
I loved the text it is very well written. Congratulations, my darling :D.
Cheers