Sunday, February 27, 2011

Mirage!


Sand, sea and sky
God's magical vellicate
Refreshes tired souls.

Alone in the deep
blue sea, or have wings to fly
Just some pure mirage!

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Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Mirage


Prompt: Vellicate



48 comments:

  1. Very beautiful..take on the prompt.. I found the prompt difficult.. but here it flows..and offers delightful touch.. thanks Amity..and good to see you back here..

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  2. Hi Ramesh, I am again reading the meaning of those prompts, I guess, I did not take the real essence....:(

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  3. Very nice haiku, and I love the picture.

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  4. I took that photo myself Teresa...thank you, glad you like it!

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  5. Oh yes Amity wondrous nature does vellicate our heart strings and the inspiration freely flows into your words :)

    ..and alone in the deep blue probably you will be seeing mirages, ;) to fly back to the warmth of home and family :)

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  6. thanks Nanka...I was thinkin i did not really get the real meaning of the prompt...glad you find it really nice... :)

    thanks so much dear...will come reading yours also... :)) happy sunday to you!

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  7. I was quite confused with how I used the prompt here Ramesh...but thank goodness, you could see some nice thoughts in here!

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  8. Your sand, sea, and sky is truly
    A mirage to me,
    Sitting here inside
    Warm from the ice outside.

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  9. You killed two birds with one stone here, congrats and the picture is just of paradise

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  10. what a beautiful scene.im envy-tickled.

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  11. stunning imagery, your writing rocks...

    link any one of your work to potluck tonight, love your support.
    :)

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  12. Amity, i can smell the beach now...

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  13. Oh, yes; a beautiful photo and solid writing to match. Enjoyed this greatlly.

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  14. A beautiful and powerful touch.

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  15. What a wonderful beach I wish I were there! But I'm afraid that it is just a mirage! Love Di ♥

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  16. Amity, is that the beach near your home? You live in such beautiful areas I think, it doesn't seem a mirage, rather some vacation destination. I wish it to be such :) that blue sea, and golden beach would be great to relax..

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  17. Thank you for this escape.

    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  18. Two, winning haikus on vellicate and mirage. Nicely written Amity!

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  19. Thanks Gerry...It must be friggin' cold outside...:)

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  20. Thanks a lot Deliderata...:) sounds almost like Desiderata...:))

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  21. Oh it is sure great to spend some time there...relaxes and refreshes tired body and mind!

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  22. Thank you Ron...but I wish I did better...:))

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  23. Thanks Sandy, glad you find it such! :)

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  24. Ha ha ha...yeah, you will enjoy it once your feet touch the white sand...I like the tickling sensation...:) And it is so soothing to someone who badly needs a respite like us...:)) Come and enjoy the beach...:)

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  25. Not so near Leo...it is 3 and 1/2 hours drive but it is worth the pain...lols! There are also beaches near us, 10 mins from my home...and beautiful too! Yeah, true, they are vacation destination, I even saw some foreigners when we went there...It is really a wonderful place to relax you know!

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  26. Thanks so much Sue...:)) Yours also I like...:))

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  27. Hi Write Girl...thank you...will check yours soon....:))

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  28. Glad you enjoyed it Madkane, thanks so much.........:))

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  29. Dear Amity,
    Namaste!
    Good Evening!
    Beautiful verses....I loved the image....lovely and soothing....
    Wishing you a wonderful evening,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  30. Amias (ljm & liquidplastic)Tuesday, March 01, 2011 5:04:00 PM

    Beautiful Amity .... just beautiful.

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  31. Thanks dear Anu...:) I wish you the same...:))

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  32. Love the imagery here and how the words work together- pure delight! And I think I would choose wings...

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  33. You made the picture come alive with your words. lovely.

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  34. Thank you Patti...me too, wings for me so I can go places and one is your place...:))

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