Sunday, October 21, 2012

Conscious




Your warm breathe I felt
Closer you came, lodged a kiss
Conscious, I begged more!


Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Conscious



10 comments:

  1. This is so comforting, so adorable. – ♥

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  2. I like the warmth of the mother ~ I have a hard time commenting here, perhaps you can allow for blogger comments ~

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  3. Yes Mama Tim, I felt that way too when I wrote it! :-) Thanks!!!

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  4. Hi Grace, thanks you felt some warmth in my lines...
    Others say that too, but I could not find how to make it easy for everyone...i will try to find out what's the problem...okay?


    Thanks again!

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  5. Absolutely beautiful, Amity! I hope all is well with you, darling. Cheers

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  6. Hi Max...yeah I am fine, only I got lazy writing the past few months as I got engrossed in my new-found passion...baking! But hey, thanks for being around now that I am here...I will try to write at least once a week when I am not that busy...missin you much and those controversial writes your posting, i like that... *winks and smiles*.... :) ;)

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