Instantly are strong culprits
Vanquishing organization’s noble mission
Into failures and dissolution
Decisively we should stand
Encourage, support and help
Direct, guide and unite
With all fellow members
Efficiency, effectiveness and success
For sure are attained
After all nobody wants
Likes or have failures
Let us then unite
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Dear Amity,
ReplyDeleteNAMASTE!
Good Evening!
United we stand and divided we fall.Unity and only unity will bring peace of mind.we don't live in an isolated space.adjustments and teamwork make the nation progress.
''Beyond happy doesn't mean everything's perfect;it means you've decided to look beyond the imperfections.
I liked your lines and as usual very good.
HAPPY HOLI!We are celebrating teh festival of colours!
Sasneham,
Anu
When I read your post
ReplyDeleteI must think of ......
"Hey you, don't tell me there's no hope at all Together we stand, divided we fall"
(from ~ Pink Floyd ~ )
We where very young I think I was a teenagers at that time ......
l~ o ~ n ~ g ago ;)
Have a relaxing weekend !!
Anya :-)
Kareltje =^.^=
Very nice acrostic.
ReplyDeletegreat job there Beng
ReplyDeletehave you forgotten me?
how abt for United we Stand :)
ReplyDeleteI love this acrostic. It personifies standing together. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteI have noticed that the theme this month has brought out a little bitterness in your acrostics. I can relate.
ReplyDeleteThe first two stanzas are alright, but the last one, especially the first three lines don't flow as well with the overall piece. Good attempt.
Mwah mwah!
ReplyDeleteIts too good sis :)
I love acrostic poems,I love this one =]
ReplyDeletethis was a very nice attempt, though we both can agree that it wasn't ur best!
ReplyDeleteHi Anu;
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
Wow...celebrating Holi! Great!!!
Thanks for your encouraging comments!
:)
Saras;
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
Anya & Kareltje;
ReplyDeleteSorry for the late reply to comments on my acros posts!
Yeah, this saying....reminiscent of high school gangs and groups! I had one way backkkkkkkk!
Shraddha;
ReplyDeleteThanks!Of course I didn't! Why?
You must be on a holiday again!
HaRy;
ReplyDeleteThere is, but not a prompt I guess!
Thanks so much!
Thanks Write Girl!
ReplyDeleteAmias;
ReplyDeleteThanks dear!
Sunakshi;
ReplyDeleteThanks dear!
Mwah, mwah, too!
Marinela;
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!