Friday, February 26, 2010

DIVIDED WE FALL

Desperation and finger pointing
Instantly are strong culprits
Vanquishing organization’s noble mission
Into failures and dissolution
Decisively we should stand
Encourage, support and help
Direct, guide and unite

With all fellow members
Efficiency, effectiveness and success  

For sure are attained
After all nobody wants
Likes or have failures
Let us then unite

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only

19 comments:

  1. Dear Amity,
    NAMASTE!
    Good Evening!
    United we stand and divided we fall.Unity and only unity will bring peace of mind.we don't live in an isolated space.adjustments and teamwork make the nation progress.
    ''Beyond happy doesn't mean everything's perfect;it means you've decided to look beyond the imperfections.
    I liked your lines and as usual very good.
    HAPPY HOLI!We are celebrating teh festival of colours!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  2. When I read your post
    I must think of ......

    "Hey you, don't tell me there's no hope at all Together we stand, divided we fall"
    (from ~ Pink Floyd ~ )

    We where very young I think I was a teenagers at that time ......
    l~ o ~ n ~ g ago ;)

    Have a relaxing weekend !!

    Anya :-)
    Kareltje =^.^=

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  3. I love this acrostic. It personifies standing together. Nicely written.

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  4. I have noticed that the theme this month has brought out a little bitterness in your acrostics. I can relate.

    The first two stanzas are alright, but the last one, especially the first three lines don't flow as well with the overall piece. Good attempt.

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  5. I love acrostic poems,I love this one =]

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  6. this was a very nice attempt, though we both can agree that it wasn't ur best!

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  7. Hi Anu;

    Thank you so much!

    Wow...celebrating Holi! Great!!!

    Thanks for your encouraging comments!

    :)

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  8. Anya & Kareltje;

    Sorry for the late reply to comments on my acros posts!

    Yeah, this saying....reminiscent of high school gangs and groups! I had one way backkkkkkkk!

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  9. Shraddha;

    Thanks!Of course I didn't! Why?

    You must be on a holiday again!

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  10. HaRy;

    There is, but not a prompt I guess!

    Thanks so much!

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  11. Sunakshi;

    Thanks dear!

    Mwah, mwah, too!

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