Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Senses Dream

Our muse so kind, dear and true often times
Some moments vague and scarcely inspires
Senses dream and mind without reason  rhymes

A dip in poetry, the mind willingly climbs
To unknown and truly dizzying heights
Our muse so kind, dear and true often times


In our deep slumber it naughtily chides
Waking us in unholy hours as mind lazily writes
Senses dream and mind without reason rhymes

Image Credit: HERE

It bugs our psyche, we would hate those rides
We embrace hesitantly the unknown realms
Our muse so kind, dear and true often times

It gives us clues, but confuses minds
It's always a struggle to find what pen desires 
Senses dream and mind without reason  rhymes
  
Once inspiration ticks and happily guides
Grab the moment as it comes in surprises 
Our muse so kind, dear and true often times
Senses dream and mind without  reason rhymes

~*~*~*~

Few notes on the poem: I intended to write a Villanelle poem with an aba rhyme scheme. I faltered in the rhyme scheme so here I am with just one rhyme. This is no longer some Villanelle na ... :( I hope the poem turned out good... :P


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Posted by Amity at Wednesday, March 23, 2011
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16 comments:

  1. JingleWednesday, March 23, 2011 11:24:00 PM

    love it,
    Thanks for the comment in my post, it is meant for fun facts,
    you need not to do chess..

    Happy Rally, you can link your entry to Vinay's post now.

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  2. AnyaThursday, March 24, 2011 4:14:00 AM

    Wonderful poem Amity
    I LOVE IT :-)
    You are a poet first class :))))))))))))))

    ((hugs))

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  3. Samer El AbedThursday, March 24, 2011 5:55:00 PM

    interesting work here...;-) ... thanks for dropping by.

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  4. SamThursday, March 24, 2011 5:57:00 PM

    interesting work here...:-) thanks for dropping by my blog.

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  5. Someone is SpecialThursday, March 24, 2011 7:03:00 PM

    Wonderful poem Amity.. Loved it.. Villanelle loved it.. here is my testimony to you,Amity

    Someone is Special

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  6. AvaThursday, March 24, 2011 7:43:00 PM

    What a great image. Awesome verse!

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  7. RajlakshmiFriday, March 25, 2011 3:16:00 AM

    the poem has indeed turned out beautifully...
    the refrain adds beauty to your words.. well penned

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  8. Magdalena HermanFriday, March 25, 2011 3:51:00 AM

    Lovely! So beautiful and poetic... The picture matches the poem perfectly. Sigh...

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  9. GuidedhopeFriday, March 25, 2011 4:21:00 AM

    I love your site and as I browsed your blog I decided to award you the Magical Blog Award.

    Go to http://astorybookworld.blogspot.com/p/awards.html and pick up your award.

    ~Deirdra

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  10. DianasiebelsFriday, March 25, 2011 8:56:00 AM

    I loved it Amity, you really have a God given talent.
    Love Di ♥

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  11. PaulamiFriday, March 25, 2011 12:10:00 PM

    loved the poem but a better pic could have justified it much better..

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  12. SilvertongueSunday, March 27, 2011 8:26:00 AM

    As a Muse-Poet, I love how you handled to topic. :) Great work.

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  13. kyogakuraSunday, March 27, 2011 9:40:00 AM

    i dont know how to go about this but your red-colored lines leave much room to be expounded upon.

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  14. TweetyShweSunday, March 27, 2011 10:37:00 PM

    aww that was beautiful amity....its so good to be back...i am sorry for being unable to read you...just not been writing much...trying to come back...and reading you is always an inspiration :) love u....

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  15. VinayMonday, March 28, 2011 2:40:00 AM

    oh, I wish my muse was so kind to me these days... she seems to be on vacation these days.. :P nice thoughts Amity..

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  16. Shagufta AbbasTuesday, March 29, 2011 4:49:00 PM

    It gives us clues, but confuses minds
    It's always a struggle to find what pen desires
    Senses dream and mind without reason rhymes

    My favorite! (:

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