Wednesday, March 02, 2011

~ My Sweet Angel ~


Oh, thou sweet, lovely, beloved angel of mine
Come, take my hand and together we’ll fly
In our windy chariot, we will recline
Lounge upon the soft cushion, you and I
Oh I have missed thee, your love and care I crave
Every night in my dreams in thee I longed
Is it morning yet? I wish I am in grave
How long have I been awake? Don’t, agony prolonged
Fate so cruel, snatched you to death
Sorrows, tears, agonies, have not resigned
Wishing that thou wilt take away my breath
My immortal angel, entwine thine hand in mine
Poems and stories, we will write blissfully    
Love so genuine and true, we’ll share eternally


Notes on this post:


To my very dear friend, you inspired me to write this, and I am dedicating this poem for you and your angel. Though written on a sad note, hopefully, this may bring a smile on your lips...:)  *smile*..... :)) And if not a smile, then it could be this.... *pout* ...:((. Wishfully, it could be like this.... *beaming*.....:D

P.S. I felt like it took me quite a lifetime to write this one. Hope you could see and feel the effort, if only to make you smile....:))

Yours,




Written for Carry on Tuesday

27 comments:

  1. it is very beautiful Amity.. yes, angels are eternal... very nicely written..

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  2. your writing is blissful - the impact eternal :) really!

    love it

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  3. Beautiful !! One could comprehend your effort put in writing thsi beautiful poem !! Indepth meanings woven wonderfully with words ! :)

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  4. Woww!!!!!!!!!! Fantastic Beautiful Write Up Dear :) :)

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  5. That is one of the best poems I have read by you :)

    Lena

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  6. That is one of the best poems I have read by you :)

    Lena

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  7. Your efforts definitely paid off. This was beautifully done. (:

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  8. Leo;

    Thanks so much...yes, you are right, our angels are there, immortal, keeping watch over us!

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  9. AD;

    Thank you so much!

    Glad u've tried to drop by...:)

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  10. Dreamy gal;

    Thanks so much for your wonderful comments...:)

    Glad u like it!

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  11. HI Lena;

    Thank you so much!

    I maybe posting this in your monthly best blog post!

    Good morning!

    :))

    Yours,

    Amity

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  12. It is a touching and beautiful poem of love and pathos in lilting style. Thanks Amity

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  13. really touched by these lines - a few in particular.

    peace,
    jp/deb

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  14. heyy...droppin here after a long tyme..frst of all wuld like 2 comment on yr new template...lukin amazin dear..rlly nice..nd dis post of yrs is too b'fuly written..must say, i really missedsumthin..returnin here after a long tyme nd m feelin rlly gudd..!!!

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  15. Old Grizz was sittin on a moutain top and almost touched the clouds
    as your words came floating by. nice work

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  16. Hi JP;

    Thanks a bunch...)

    glad u could relate to a few lines...:)

    Good morning!

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  17. Hi Madhu;

    My heart went pitter-patter for seeing u here at last! yeah, it's a beautiful template isn't it? i love the color and the simplicity of it all!

    Please write some posts soon..i missed you really, ur visibility at blogworld, too!

    Try to sneak once in a while in office! Lols...:)

    Hugs my dear...:) ^.^

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  18. Sg beatty;

    Hi! Thanks for I have given u some lil' inspiration in my poem...:)

    Good morning from the Philippines!

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  19. I still dreaming that sometimes my angel would guide me in the paradise where I could meet my sweet and lovely one...dear Amity. Nice poems dear Amity...

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  20. smart piece,

    magical imagery...
    A++

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  21. That was very touching yet sad Amity. I love your writing.
    Love Di ♥

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  22. An old poem this one...and I reposted it...I just love the message! Thanks Di! Have a great weekend..:)

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