If the word spoken
Comes straight from the heart
Is it love fluently spoken?
If the feeling displayed
Is shown with respect
Is it love fluently spoken?
If he looks in your eyes
And you melt in his gaze
Is it love fluently spoken?
If a smile makes your heart
Skip a bit, goes pitter, patter
Is it love fluently spoken?
We don't need to say a word or two
As action speaks louder than words
Is it love fluently spoken?
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Written for One Single Impression
Prompt: LANGUAGE
Also written for:
Poetry Picnic 7: Love and Loss
The Gooseberry Garden,
Jingle Poetry Community's New Home,
A Place for Poets To Share and Get Inspired!
Love is in the actions - how we treat each other.
ReplyDeleteA lovely verse
ReplyDeleteI believe it is! Well done.
ReplyDeleteLanguage of the heart is beautiful and and its nuances are beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely.http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/
Words are very unrefined way to convey love. So well said here.
ReplyDeleteI have a quote by Mark Twain on my blog for OSI entry today Amity and it speaks volumes!! Language need not be a barrier at all, if there is understanding of expressions and gestures!! We are somewhat on the same plain today!! :)
ReplyDeleteIt certainly is. Enjoyed that.
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed...
ReplyDeletei finally got the time and opportunity to come read your blog again. Oh i've missed it so! and it is lovely as always.. :)
ReplyDeleteIt is love fluently spoken.. Amity.. well done.. Ant and eleph will be back.. you have to wait...
ReplyDeleteYour heart language tell love very nicely.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back, Amity.
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what wonderful vocabulary for thought.
ReplyDeleteplease have a good new week.
daily athens
YES! the answer is yes, if we feel another with our heart and soul the
ReplyDeletelanguage is fluently spoken.
Often the best things are spoken with the heart
ReplyDeleteI love the repetition in this poem. You're right. Actions DO speak louder than words.
ReplyDeleteWonderful work!
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gestures and images complete that fluency...beautiful words and pic!!
ReplyDeleteOh, yes! Such a lovely poem. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI think it is! Very nicely spoken, Amity! Good write!
ReplyDeleteOh yes.. I agree with the advise that is there in this...
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing at Poetry Picnic WK 7… I look forward to reading more from you in our next week theme “Friends, relationships and everyone around”…Shashiॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah Shivayahttp://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.html
brilliant words.
ReplyDeletetrue and lovely.
Happy Poetry Picnic.
Hello.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely sounds like love to me.
Beautiful expressions & love your image.
Thanks for sharing & for the visit too. Much appreciated.
Unchain My Heart
You words just sing and the thought are so wonderful this is an excellent piece of poetry and so well done thanks for sharing
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/
This language is universally spoken and understood . Loved the opening stanza ... the weave and perfect ending of the last one. Fine job!
Love speaks many languages and quite fluently. Actions do speak louder than words, cause many times people claim to love you and then their actions show little proof of it.
ReplyDeleteAnother side of the coin: many are charming (with piercing looks, with an energy that makes one's heart throb and all) but their charms conceal darkness...
Marvellous post, my darling!
Cheers
Outstanding post.... its perfectly sketched... <3
ReplyDeleteWell, is it? :-)
ReplyDeleteThis Fence Knows Riddles
My Lines...
ReplyDeleteI thought that poemsAre true words from heartAnd its loudness madeThe sulk to depart.
Thanks Jain Ruchi...you made tender lines to shooo away sad thoughts...:)
ReplyDeleteHmmm....it is so...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you KP...:)
ReplyDeleteYes Sandy and thank you...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shail, I believe it so...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Harshad...:) I do believe that too!
ReplyDeleteYes so very much on same plain Nanka...I'd rather not speak much and show it in actions, for as many have said, 'action speaks louder than words'...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony, glad you enjoyed it...:)
ReplyDeleteYes Prams...:)
ReplyDeleteI missed you too m7...where are you these days?
ReplyDeleteThanks RS...just that I like your eleph-ant poems always...
ReplyDeleteThanks JIm...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Robert...:) same to you!
ReplyDeleteTrue Cynthia true and thanks so much for the visit...:)
ReplyDeleteYes Suzie I am with you...:)
ReplyDeleteYes Mary it is...thanks a lot!
ReplyDeleteThank you Gautami...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra...you are simply inspiring in your comments...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kaysalady...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Marbles...glad you find it a good write...:)
ReplyDeleteHi Shashi...I guess I am already late for this week's Poetry Picnic...:) Will try to be around next week..
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read! :)
Thank you Morning...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks to you too Andy...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks so very much Ann...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks to you Becca...:)
ReplyDeleteSo true Max...:) You've said it well..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit...:)
That must be true Guest and thanks to you...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Wonderwall...:)
ReplyDeleteYes, I think so...:)
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