Sunday, August 01, 2010

STAND



Silly, naughty, obnoxious little imp
Teacher he taunted who walks in a limp
A hard slap he suffered
No more would he be wretched
Determined he’ll not act as dirty chimp

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Limerick Form - a limerick is defined as “a light humorous, nonsensical, or bawdy verse of 5 anapestic lines usually with the rhyme scheme aabba”. Lines 1, 2, and 5 have 7 to 10 syllables and the last words rhyme. Lines 3 and 4 of Limericks have 5 to 7 syllables and the last words rhyme.

Written for Acrostic Only (Prompt: Stand)




11 comments:

  1. Beautiful Fantastic Lines Dear :) :) Happy Friendship Day Sis :) :)

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  2. The picture and the words simply matched. It just portrayed a naughty kid so well.

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  3. Dear Amity,
    NAMASTE!

    Learning to stand tall,
    We must know right from childhood.
    Love and care play an important role,
    In moulding the blooming minds.
    Beautiful lines,Amity!
    I am happy I can even share silence with you.
    HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  4. Dear Amity,
    NAMSTE!
    Good Afternoon!
    Learning to stand tall,
    Must be begun from the childhood.
    Amity,well expressed thoughts as usual.
    I am happy that I can even share silence with you!
    Thanks a bunch!
    HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  5. Beautiful.. he will never forget to be nice with everyone..

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  6. Wonderful, Amity... mischievous and so much fun. This was a delight to read :)

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  7. Nicely made both picture and words.Do naughty children grow to be intelligent in the later years?

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  8. Amity, very wonderfully expressed and a fact, if someone wants to know the flags of different countries they can come here and know them.. Great man...

    Yours Frendly,
    Saravana Kumar M

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