Thursday, September 23, 2010

Puppy Love???


Seated on a bench along a boulevard one cloudy late afternoon, playmates Camille and John were a picture of happy kids. Innocent and with utter lack of guile in looks, they always teased each other even to the extent of John nudging Camille that they hold hands.

When Camille answered with a giggle, John without forewarning, planted a kiss on Camille’s cheeks of which the latter’s reaction was just to close her eyes. When she stood up and started walking dazed, John suddenly felt attracted to her gait. Will the blossoming love ripen at that age? Maybe? A puppy love?....:)

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Written for Thursday Tales 

Prompts: gait, nudge, ripen


25 comments:

  1. This is interesting.. yes some times it blossoms in to something very beautiful.. may time be on their side..

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  2. Cute!
    Now I have the song Puppy Love stuck in my head...

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  3. how abt kitten love, cub love :) ! where are they and what are they!

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  4. such sweetness in this coming-of-age tale.

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  5. Such a cute and beautiful story, Amity. Very innocent and can picture the two children. Enjoyed it greatly!! :)

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  6. Extremely nice story bringing out the innocence of the two children and their affection for each other.

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  7. LOL! You have Disqus, then word verification and comment moderation!

    All the things tp put of commeters!

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  8. Amity,

    Unable to usable the Comment box, but I could type in text in this Reply box. Hence, this reply to KP's comment instead of posting a new one. Thought I would let you know.

    Super cute story. Liked the title too, puppy love :D

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  9. this was a pretty scene you drew .. :D

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  10. Phew, love is a much splendid thing!

    Nicely!!

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  11. Yes Ramesh, maybe? Who knows! Thanks!

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  12. :)

    Oh I know that song too, I guess... "And they call it puppy love... "

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  13. hmmm...could you write one about a cub/kitten love? that would be some fun dear! :P

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  14. yeah...does it still exist? maybe? thanks TGA... :)

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  15. Yeah Nanka, it reminds me too of a puppy love of my past! :)

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  16. Thanks Melissa, happy to note that I was able to cheer you up today!

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  17. Hi Vee,

    Does it prohibits you from commenting? Oh sorry, I thought Discqus comment platform is easy on everyone...sorry for the discomfort, it has given you... :(

    Thanks for your wonderful comment, glad you like it! :) Good morning Vee... and have a beautiful Monday! :)

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  18. Hi Gautami... :) Not anymore dear...I have added you already in my Whitelist of commenters... :) So you dont have to put up with verification and moderation... :) Sorry for the inconvenience! :)

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  19. I believe that too! That puppy love is a kind of pure love! :)

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