Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Morning Thoughts ~ Tears In Heaven


The angels in heaven poured buckets of tears while I in my sleep silently stained my pillow with tears. Were they sad when they saw me hurting and in pain? Did they also cry to appease my troubled heart? Were those tears caused by some trifle matters? If it were so? What would be the repercussions? And why?

Thoughtless and hurting words
Regardless how inadvertently spoken
Impacts on sensitive feelings
Friendship should be nurtured
Lovingly cultivated to prevent
Erosion of binding love 

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Written for:

(Prompt: Angel)

and also for:

Prompt: (Trifle)

Photo Courtesy: Darkeus Magnus


18 comments:

  1. Beautiful acrostic, Amity. You words have a celestial wonder to them, making them an absolute joy to read.

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  2. Woww!!!!!! Beautiful Fantastic Fabulous Write Up :) :) You Have Very Well Correlated Both Angel With Trifle. Thanks A Lot For Sharing Dear :) :)

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  3. I love the title, and the verse was absolutely wonderful.

    Yvonne.

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  4. Amity, Thank you for visiting my blog. You are welcome anytime. Your blog is beautiful and your posts are thought provoking. I will be sure to visit often.
    Terrie

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  5. Wonderful, the connection between the two prompts was intelligently done.

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  6. Dear Amity,
    Namaste!
    Good Morning!
    So touching and well expressed thoughts!
    I can relate to your lines so well.They are straight from the heart.
    Let go.And move on.That is what I am doing now.
    Please don't make the angel cry.She has to smile and spread smiles.
    Wishing you a bright and beautiful day with all smiles,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  7. Hi Amity,

    Beautiful imagery in this poem...what a lovely acrostic.

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  8. Erosion of binding love...
    Well you could bind so well the strings of words, emotions and thoughts!!
    Beautiful...So magical!!

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  9. Amity... just a suggestion...pls can yu write something funny like this? pls for me!

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  10. That was just wonderful. Beautiful acrostic, Amity. Enjoyed the read. Great post!

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  11. Well Amity... what to say.. spoken word..why do one need a sword..yes, inappropriate rash words hurt..and they do the same to others too..

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  12. This touched the very soul of me Amity.

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  13. This touched the very soul of me Amity.

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  14. Beautiful words Amity! Very uplifting to the heart!
    Love Di ♥

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  15. Yes, friendship needs to be cared for like an infant. Even it cries for attention.

    Beautiful words.

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  16. Very nice, Amity. Friendship is high on human needs. I enjoyed it.
    I just wrote mine, it is on love, also a human need.

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