The angels in heaven poured buckets of tears while I in my sleep silently stained my pillow with tears. Were they sad when they saw me hurting and in pain? Did they also cry to appease my troubled heart? Were those tears caused by some trifle matters? If it were so? What would be the repercussions? And why?
Thoughtless and hurting words
Regardless how inadvertently spoken
Impacts on sensitive feelings
Friendship should be nurtured
Lovingly cultivated to prevent
Erosion of binding love
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Written for:
(Prompt: Angel)
and also for:
Prompt: (Trifle)
Photo Courtesy: Darkeus Magnus
Beautiful acrostic, Amity. You words have a celestial wonder to them, making them an absolute joy to read.
ReplyDeleteWoww!!!!!! Beautiful Fantastic Fabulous Write Up :) :) You Have Very Well Correlated Both Angel With Trifle. Thanks A Lot For Sharing Dear :) :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed :)
ReplyDeleteI love the title, and the verse was absolutely wonderful.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Amity, Thank you for visiting my blog. You are welcome anytime. Your blog is beautiful and your posts are thought provoking. I will be sure to visit often.
ReplyDeleteTerrie
Wonderful, the connection between the two prompts was intelligently done.
ReplyDeleteDear Amity,
ReplyDeleteNamaste!
Good Morning!
So touching and well expressed thoughts!
I can relate to your lines so well.They are straight from the heart.
Let go.And move on.That is what I am doing now.
Please don't make the angel cry.She has to smile and spread smiles.
Wishing you a bright and beautiful day with all smiles,
Sasneham,
Anu
Hi Amity,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery in this poem...what a lovely acrostic.
Erosion of binding love...
ReplyDeleteWell you could bind so well the strings of words, emotions and thoughts!!
Beautiful...So magical!!
Amity... just a suggestion...pls can yu write something funny like this? pls for me!
ReplyDeleteThat was just wonderful. Beautiful acrostic, Amity. Enjoyed the read. Great post!
ReplyDeleteWell Amity... what to say.. spoken word..why do one need a sword..yes, inappropriate rash words hurt..and they do the same to others too..
ReplyDeleteThis touched the very soul of me Amity.
ReplyDeleteThis touched the very soul of me Amity.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully weaved. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words Amity! Very uplifting to the heart!
ReplyDeleteLove Di ♥
Yes, friendship needs to be cared for like an infant. Even it cries for attention.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.
Very nice, Amity. Friendship is high on human needs. I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI just wrote mine, it is on love, also a human need.