Sunday, August 22, 2010

Pensive


Festive atmosphere
pensive mood with anxious thoughts
rebellious tummy

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P.S. My mind is proposing to have this linked at LOL, but sounds not so funny da! Whew....we'll see...is there really a haiku written to make others laugh? Maybe this one, I would be first! Lols! :P

Written for 
Prompt: Pensive

Also for:
Prompt: Festival


58 comments:

  1. You did make me laugh...well done Amity.. Another 06 -08 hours would be postin my 100th post on OSI Prompt.. however do visit for preludes to pensive..even now..

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  2. A charming and delightful haiku, Amity, it made me laugh :D

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  3. Why not a haiku written for fun? Why not a serious limerick? Start something new! Well, you have!

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  4. Wow, you had made me laugh and also covered three prompts.. Great..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  5. Eat girl, eat... as much as u can. It does no harm as long as you laugh it out!

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  6. Um! Where's the proposal? But a fun senryu.

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  7. O that last line sends the sobre reflection into a whirlwind spin! Love it!

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  8. Hi Amity,
    Even the festive mood cannot suppress a rumbling tummy. LOL!! :D
    You do get anxious to satisfy it...
    Loved the idea!!

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  9. Amity, it made me laugh! Excellently written haiku!

    -Weasel =)

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  10. well, it worked somehow Amity.. ;) got a chuckle out of me for sure! :)

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  11. Yes, definitely a funny one :-)
    Enjoyed that.

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  12. This left much to the imagination:)

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  13. LoL. I know where of this speaks to when it comes to a rebel
    tummy, mine is always growling.

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  14. I know such rebellions!

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  15. when atmosphere is festive, why restrict?

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  16. This comment did make me laugh! Check out badku.com for a host of funny haiku: I'm a big fan of unholy twerp!

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  17. It is indeed humorous and very well conceived, Amity.

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  18. well it did :)...whasat festive?

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  19. Festive mood and rebellious tummy -a funny situation

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  20. Thanks Ramesh, I made you laugh! Will come to your place soon, it's just that I can't do now, I am on R & R but will brb...:)

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  21. Quite nice suggestions Brebry...:) Thanks so much!

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  22. Hi Someone;

    I am happy I made you laugh...;) Thanks so much!

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  23. That will make my tummy rebellious... :) Thanks Harshad!

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  24. The proposal is in the PS notes... :) Thank you!

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  25. Thanks Gemma, glad you love it! :)

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  26. Of course rumbling tummy spoils the fun, right? Thanks Nanka, glad you love the idea... :)

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  27. Happy to note I made you laugh Weasel... :) Thanks! :)

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  28. Thanks for the chuckle Leo, now this would qualify for the LOL meme of yours... :)

    Re: using one post for three memes, I am not lazy but I am on vacation, I told you and it's a special vacation, right?

    Be back soon as promised! :) Thanks for linking this to OSI! :)

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  29. Thanks Anthony, glad you had such fun with this! :)

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  30. Oh I know hence I used the world rebellious coz I can't use the exact words, it will kill the fun!

    Hey, long time you were not seen, glad you're back now... :)

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  31. Yeah, we do Sandy! Thanks so much! :)

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  32. Hmmm...incidentally, we can't control an upset tummy that's gonna spoil the fun!

    Thanks! :)

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  33. The pic looks romantic but the haiku is in for some fun and trouble! :)

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  34. Hi Christine, I did check out the link you gave and now that justifies this post of mine! Glad your a big fan, though I am still trying to be!

    Thanks so much!

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  35. Thank you so much Saras and thanks for the visit! :)

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  36. Now we're even this time on making readers laugh at our post coz I made you smile!

    Thanks HaRy! :)

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  37. Oh really? Now I found a friend in you! Let's have some concert with a rebelling tummy someday soon! :)

    Thanks so much Cynthia!

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  38. hehehehe... this was awesome!!
    And I can so very well relate to this!!! It has happened many a time with me...
    Too good, Amity!!! :D

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  39. Interesting and amusing scenario portray, kinda of make me laugh in a way:3 Thank for sharing^^

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  40. Hi Amity.. my 100th post and LOL as well as Festival Haiku await your visit.. do bless as always.. LOL is going to be indeed a very funny site..yes.

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  41. Wow...so here you are Kavita!:)

    Thanks for dropping by and glad you like my first attempt to contribute at LOL! :)

    G'nayt! :)

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  42. Hi Rika,

    Thanks dear, glad I made you laugh...XD :)

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  43. Hi Ramesh,

    Of course, I will be visiting your 100th post! Thanks for reminding!

    Yes, LOL will be a funny site for ribtickler bloggers!

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  44. Thanks Amity, your words are tooooooooo inspiring.. wow! I am so happy.. well age.. does it matter.. still I just turned 50...or is it 15.. but actullay I am 50 years young.. have not permitted my thoughts to get wrinkled.. A good amount of people after talking on phone feel I must be about 30-35...but my grey hair give away.. no I don't colour them.. not essential really.. can you finght with nature.. No.. and for LOL.. I am happy to find it.. I think I went through your page only..don't remember..

    Can't say I am becoming popular but yes happy to finnd the number of visitors increasing.. I think it all depends.. Many thanks for your good wishes.. infact people like you embolden to think and write.. lets be in touch through this space..

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  45. Thanks Ramesh, but sorry for some queries! I lost one follower, a very good and dear one when I told I want to grow old like her!

    Have a nice day!

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  46. I came back to give these awesome awards! =)

    http://systematicweasel.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/awards/

    -Weasel

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  47. Enjoying where your imagination took you. Certainly lightened the mood!

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  48. Cute! I can only imagine the result of the anxious tummy- pensive thoughts indeed! Thanks so much for your recent commnet about cross stitching. It is very hard to have more than one passion at a time, isn't it? I would love to see pics of some of the things you have made! Have a wonderful tomorrow!

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  49. Thanks Weasel, because of the awesome awards you saved my day! My blog will not be empty this Sunday for OSI, as I posted the awards and passed it onto some few bloggers I met at OSI!

    Really, really thank you Weasel! Have a beautiful Sunday!

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  50. Thanks Gabrielle, glad you enjoyed this post and have lightened your mood! :)

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  51. Hi Patti,

    Yeah it is really hard to more than one passion at a time! I felt that dilemma you know! :)

    And for the pics of my cross-stitch works, I will share it with you on my succeeding posts when I will be back in active mode! :)

    Have a wonderful week ahead Patti! :)

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  52. Thanks Theresa, yes indeed! Glad you like it! :)

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