Thursday, July 22, 2010

Victim

Hook, line and sinker
Poor victim jumps at the bait
Delicious dinner


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Written for Three Word Wednesday (Prompts: bait, jump, victim)

17 comments:

  1. I like the last line, it really ties the whole thing together

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  2. Well written, "Delicious Post"

    Yours Frendly,
    Saravana Kumar M

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  3. Lots of fishy poems this week. Given the words, hardly a surprise.

    I enjoyed your haiku and it made me hungry! :-)

    http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/?p=456

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  4. The prompt words effectively put to use in just a few lines. Well done.

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  5. Thank you, for your wonderful comments and your visit in spite of shortage of time.. I appreciate and it makes me happy..bait is always thrown when one seeks victims for personal gratification.
    But then awareness helps and one can choose irrespective of the environment around..life tells me that its finally inner environment that truly matters.. well..good to have wonderful people like you around..BTW my book is in English.. I am trying to create a soft copy which i will be able to then send.. Actually its four liners and some of my posts hve rhymes taken from that.. God bless..shall try acrostics..but can't say..Keep sharing..

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  6. sigh..the last line just describes it all.. :) lovely as usual..i just can write haiku..so i am in love with all those people who write them...and in a way teach me to...

    PS: i dont mind...whenever u have time..u can come back to my place amity..it will be there :D

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  7. Wonderful play with words. How so little can say so much! :-) Blessings to you and your loved ones.

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  8. Well said. Writers prey on curiosity. Firms prey on customers, all with some catchy hooklines.

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  9. CUTE AND WITTY DEAR:)...Enjoyed it:)...

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  10. Nice Amity! Your poem helped to make up my decision on lunch! :-)

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