Languid heart
Of mine is
Vain of
Expressing how
You complete me coz'
Only you could
Understand me.
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Photo Courtesy
Monday, December 21, 2009
I LOVE YOU
Languid heart
Of mine is
Vain of
Expressing how
You complete me coz'
Only you could
Understand me.
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Photo Courtesy
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'You complete me' says everything about love..wonderful expression Amity !
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said
ReplyDeleteawesome :)...
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
Dear Amity,
ReplyDeleteGood Evening!
lines of love n strong belief!you are lucky to have someone to love you wholeheartedly.
with a clear heart n mind,
wishing you,dear friend,
A Merry Christmas!
Sasneham,
Anu
Touching words :-)
ReplyDeleteLove is the best feeling there is!!
Lovely written ...
(@^.^@)
Brilliant! Nice blog layout btw! :D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Dear :) :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeletePerfect! :)
ReplyDeleteperhaps if the last line was "understand me", it might make more sense? :)
Good suggestion Leo.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is suppose to be about how you love him, but it's got two different thoughts. To make them work, you should have just said in the first line ..
"I love you"
Then the other stanza would make better sense because you would be telling him/her why?
Vanessa;
ReplyDeletethank you so much!
:)
KP;
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
Hems;
ReplyDeleteyeah? thanks!
:)
Anu;
ReplyDeletewe all wish to have this kind of someone who could really love us!
:)
Anya;
ReplyDelete..can be written in so many ways..."love"...:)
Creativity;
ReplyDelete..thanks a lot dear!
:)
Princes Nuchu:
ReplyDeleteas wonderful as you are!
*wink*...*wink*!
Leo;
ReplyDeletethanks dear, I gave in to your suggestion, it sounds better really!
Amias;
ReplyDeleteand another lesson learned...thank you so much!
:)