Monday, December 21, 2009

I LOVE YOU


I know this

Languid heart
Of mine is
Vain of
Expressing how

You complete me coz'
Only you could
Understand me.

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
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19 comments:

  1. 'You complete me' says everything about love..wonderful expression Amity !

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  2. Dear Amity,
    Good Evening!
    lines of love n strong belief!you are lucky to have someone to love you wholeheartedly.
    with a clear heart n mind,
    wishing you,dear friend,
    A Merry Christmas!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  3. Touching words :-)
    Love is the best feeling there is!!
    Lovely written ...

    (@^.^@)

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  4. Perfect! :)

    perhaps if the last line was "understand me", it might make more sense? :)

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  5. Good suggestion Leo.

    The poem is suppose to be about how you love him, but it's got two different thoughts. To make them work, you should have just said in the first line ..

    "I love you"

    Then the other stanza would make better sense because you would be telling him/her why?

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  6. Anu;

    we all wish to have this kind of someone who could really love us!

    :)

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  7. Anya;

    ..can be written in so many ways..."love"...:)

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  8. Princes Nuchu:

    as wonderful as you are!

    *wink*...*wink*!

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  9. Leo;

    thanks dear, I gave in to your suggestion, it sounds better really!

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  10. Amias;

    and another lesson learned...thank you so much!

    :)

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