Sunday, January 17, 2010

Chaos




Unfathomable

she struggled but chaos

still lingers in.


Written for One Single Impression (Prompt: Chaos)
Photo Courtesy

47 comments:

  1. Chaos sneaks into the smallest interstices.

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  2. the more you try to suppress; it bounces with more vigor. very well done

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  3. Phew, unfathomable, I don't suppose we'll ever be able to fathom the chaos!

    The scene in the picture seems a good place to contemplate this though!

    Nicely!!

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  4. I love that you found such a wonderfully appropriate 5 syllable word for your first line!

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  5. It's pretty chaotic if we become really bothered by not understanding.
    ..

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  6. Beautiful!

    I came over from MBC! I am now following you.
    Heather
    http://www.ratherbechangingdiapers.com/

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  7. Hi Anthony;

    ...yes, it is...:)

    thanks...:)

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  8. Natalie;

    i feel the same way...:)

    :)

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  9. Bluemist;

    why it is so? and i really wonder why? human nature?

    thanks so much!

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  10. Sweetest in the Gale;

    ..yeah, as persistent as one would never expect it to be!

    Have a nice day!

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  11. Andy;

    ..yeah, the best i could choose to match the words...:)

    thanks for dropping by my place...:)

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  12. Creativity;

    thanks so much dear...:)

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  13. Sue;

    it gave me six days to choose the appropriate word, that's how hard i work at OSI...:)

    thanks so much dear!

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  14. Mads;

    ...yeah, thanks a lot for your continued support...:)

    missyah!

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  15. PS;

    thanks so much and glad u've come at last! I've missed u don;t you know that? I no longer write at the lounge, they deleted my last post last week without explaining the reason why...:)

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  16. Heather,

    thanks so much.

    I've added u in my blogroll now...be following u from now on....:)

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  17. Chaos does linger with us. Part of lifes challenge is to understand it, and do our best in spite of it.

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  18. Dear Snow White;

    Life isn't a fairy like like Snow White, isn't it.

    Thanks so much dear! Glad u like it.

    :)

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  19. Hi Tumblewords;

    Thanks so much, happy to note you like it!

    :)

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  20. Rob;

    Yes, i believe it so...because that is what's life made of...!

    Thanks for your comments!

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  21. I love how you ended this short poem, lingers, and that you didn't say 'lingers on.' Having it 'linger in' is powerful. Means it's going to stay awhile. Good job!

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  22. I like it a lot and I think we can all relate

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  23. well done...isn't is strange how all the women seem to express chaos internally.

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  24. Your picture and poem make me wonder what she is struggling with and what was so unfathomable! Great interpretation~

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  25. quiet contemplation...chaos seems afar....

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  26. Hi Julie;

    thanks for sharing and for dissecting my work giving me a positive interpretation...:)

    again, thank you so much!

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  27. LIssa;

    ...thanks to you, too!

    have a nice day!

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  28. Emptygarden;

    Women are more expressive than men, is it?

    thanks for sharing your thoughts!

    :)

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  29. Patti;

    ..am happy i left you thinkin about it!

    thanks so much!

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  30. Pieceofpie;

    ...yeah, maybe and thanks so much!

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  31. Thanks for sharing. A beautiful poem.


    Melanie

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  32. It does have a way of seeping in. If only we could make our peace with it...

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  33. Gabrielle;

    yes, you got it right!

    thanks so much!

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