Sunday, January 17, 2010

Chaos




Unfathomable

she struggled but chaos

still lingers in.


Written for One Single Impression (Prompt: Chaos)
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Posted by Amity at Sunday, January 17, 2010
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47 comments:

  1. anthonynorthSunday, January 17, 2010 6:11:00 PM

    So often the case. Very true words.

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  2. spacedlawSunday, January 17, 2010 8:37:00 PM

    Chaos sneaks into the smallest interstices.

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  3. JeevesSunday, January 17, 2010 8:52:00 PM

    Lingers in...true...nice image

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  4. AnonymousSunday, January 17, 2010 9:19:00 PM

    the more you try to suppress; it bounces with more vigor. very well done

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  5. Sherri B.Sunday, January 17, 2010 9:43:00 PM

    Chaos is very persistent...wonderful words!

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  6. Andy SewinaSunday, January 17, 2010 9:43:00 PM

    Phew, unfathomable, I don't suppose we'll ever be able to fathom the chaos!

    The scene in the picture seems a good place to contemplate this though!

    Nicely!!

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  7. CreativitySunday, January 17, 2010 10:49:00 PM

    Beautiful Fabulous Lines Dear :) :)

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  8. sgreerpittSunday, January 17, 2010 11:05:00 PM

    I love that you found such a wonderfully appropriate 5 syllable word for your first line!

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  9. Mads...Monday, January 18, 2010 3:05:00 AM

    short n true..beautiful dear..!

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  10. PS the PratsieMonday, January 18, 2010 3:33:00 AM

    well said !!

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  11. JimMonday, January 18, 2010 5:12:00 AM

    It's pretty chaotic if we become really bothered by not understanding.
    ..

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  12. UnknownMonday, January 18, 2010 11:00:00 AM

    Beautiful!

    I came over from MBC! I am now following you.
    Heather
    http://www.ratherbechangingdiapers.com/

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  13. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:18:00 PM

    Hi Anthony;

    ...yes, it is...:)

    thanks...:)

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  14. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:18:00 PM

    Natalie;

    i feel the same way...:)

    :)

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  15. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:19:00 PM

    Jeeves;

    thanks so much...:)

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  16. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:19:00 PM

    Bluemist;

    why it is so? and i really wonder why? human nature?

    thanks so much!

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  17. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:20:00 PM

    Sweetest in the Gale;

    ..yeah, as persistent as one would never expect it to be!

    Have a nice day!

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  18. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:21:00 PM

    Andy;

    ..yeah, the best i could choose to match the words...:)

    thanks for dropping by my place...:)

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  19. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:21:00 PM

    Creativity;

    thanks so much dear...:)

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  20. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:22:00 PM

    Sue;

    it gave me six days to choose the appropriate word, that's how hard i work at OSI...:)

    thanks so much dear!

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  21. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:23:00 PM

    Mads;

    ...yeah, thanks a lot for your continued support...:)

    missyah!

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  22. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:24:00 PM

    PS;

    thanks so much and glad u've come at last! I've missed u don;t you know that? I no longer write at the lounge, they deleted my last post last week without explaining the reason why...:)

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  23. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:24:00 PM

    Jim;

    ...that's true!

    :)

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  24. AmityMonday, January 18, 2010 4:27:00 PM

    Heather,

    thanks so much.

    I've added u in my blogroll now...be following u from now on....:)

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  25. Snow WhiteTuesday, January 19, 2010 1:38:00 AM

    Nice one dear :)very true..

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  26. Tumblewords:Tuesday, January 19, 2010 2:15:00 AM

    Oh, so true. Nice work.

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  27. Loch RobTuesday, January 19, 2010 10:47:00 AM

    Chaos does linger with us. Part of lifes challenge is to understand it, and do our best in spite of it.

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  28. madeline d. murrayTuesday, January 19, 2010 2:48:00 PM

    So true. Well done, Amity.

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  29. AmityTuesday, January 19, 2010 5:46:00 PM

    Dear Snow White;

    Life isn't a fairy like like Snow White, isn't it.

    Thanks so much dear! Glad u like it.

    :)

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  30. AmityTuesday, January 19, 2010 5:52:00 PM

    Hi Tumblewords;

    Thanks so much, happy to note you like it!

    :)

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  31. AmityTuesday, January 19, 2010 5:54:00 PM

    Rob;

    Yes, i believe it so...because that is what's life made of...!

    Thanks for your comments!

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  32. AmityTuesday, January 19, 2010 5:55:00 PM

    Madeline;

    ...thanks so much!

    :)

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  33. AnonymousTuesday, January 19, 2010 10:23:00 PM

    I love how you ended this short poem, lingers, and that you didn't say 'lingers on.' Having it 'linger in' is powerful. Means it's going to stay awhile. Good job!

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  34. lissaTuesday, January 19, 2010 10:32:00 PM

    I like it a lot and I think we can all relate

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  35. AnonymousTuesday, January 19, 2010 11:23:00 PM

    well done...isn't is strange how all the women seem to express chaos internally.

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  36. PattiWednesday, January 20, 2010 1:32:00 AM

    Your picture and poem make me wonder what she is struggling with and what was so unfathomable! Great interpretation~

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  37. AnonymousWednesday, January 20, 2010 5:06:00 AM

    quiet contemplation...chaos seems afar....

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  38. AmityWednesday, January 20, 2010 3:19:00 PM

    Hi Julie;

    thanks for sharing and for dissecting my work giving me a positive interpretation...:)

    again, thank you so much!

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  39. AmityWednesday, January 20, 2010 3:20:00 PM

    LIssa;

    ...thanks to you, too!

    have a nice day!

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  40. AmityWednesday, January 20, 2010 3:21:00 PM

    Emptygarden;

    Women are more expressive than men, is it?

    thanks for sharing your thoughts!

    :)

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  41. AmityWednesday, January 20, 2010 3:21:00 PM

    Patti;

    ..am happy i left you thinkin about it!

    thanks so much!

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  42. AmityWednesday, January 20, 2010 3:22:00 PM

    Pieceofpie;

    ...yeah, maybe and thanks so much!

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  43. Cassiopeia RisesWednesday, January 20, 2010 11:50:00 PM

    Thanks for sharing. A beautiful poem.


    Melanie

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  44. AmityThursday, January 21, 2010 6:40:00 AM

    Melanie;

    Thanks to you, too!

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  45. gabrielleFriday, January 22, 2010 11:11:00 AM

    It does have a way of seeping in. If only we could make our peace with it...

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  46. AmitySaturday, January 23, 2010 8:32:00 PM

    Gabrielle;

    yes, you got it right!

    thanks so much!

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  47. Vinay Leo R.Saturday, February 13, 2010 9:54:00 AM

    really, a perfect haiku dear! :)

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