Utterly refreshing; pleasant
Many rainy days
Mindful farmers pray
Earnestly giving thanks
Relief for crops
Rain showers evoke
An unexpressed glee
Impulsively I dance
Natives going wild
Impulsively I dance
Natives going wild
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
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ReplyDeleteThis is good..
ReplyDeleteBTW I tried my hand at Acrostics last nite..and honestly I guess I need to learn a lot..
By the time I reach the last alphabet I lose the track..
Here is my incomplete attempt..I know I suck at it..(Need some lessons)
W- Winter was warm, while she grew cold
I- I had been silent for a long while
N- Not too many words had she told
T- Tis is life I know
E- Everything comes to an end
R- Ripping your heart apart
S-
I know that dance...it brings the rain and thanks it at the same time...
ReplyDeleteThanks for this!!
hw b'fully u hav presented the nature's beauty..'Rain showers evoked.An unexpressed glee'
ReplyDeleteluved the poem..:)
Good attempt on the prompt.
ReplyDelete"Impulsively I dance" Love that line. It shows how the rain not only awoke the world and the crops, but you as well. Wonderful.
ReplyDelete"Impulsively I dance" Love that line. It shows how the rain not only awoke the world and the crops, but you as well. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteAmias;
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry I failed you in this.
Really sorry! I'd make-up soon!
MIssy;
ReplyDeleteInnocence is pure bliss, isn't it?
:)
Dev;
ReplyDeleteW
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Ripping your heart apart though
Struggling to keep the warmth
Maybe this would work.
Now you can post it as your new blog in your space.
Not bad, in fact it's well written and seems not neophyte's work at all.
We at AO follows a standard like 2 or 3 words per line.
But we can write acros in any way we like Dev, and yours came out so well.
Keep up!
Beth;
ReplyDelete...thanks so much!!!
:)
tHanks Mads;
ReplyDeletebut this piece went through a lot of revisions, thanks to Amias...:)
:)
Saras;
ReplyDeletethanks!!!
not really good...suicidal work huh!
only me and Amias knows that!
:)
HI Eva;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! glad you like it!
Singing in the rain, have you tried? at the top of your voice till your lungs would almost burst out?
I have done that and i feel so happy doing it!
:)
I enjoyed this very much. Felt every word.
ReplyDeleteSandy;
ReplyDeletethanks so much!
good evening here!
:)
Amity, you've captured a feel of peace in this acrostic, touching on the reflective effect which rain brings. I love rain, wish it would drizzle five days a week :) Sometimes sun is good. I like this the best:
ReplyDeleteRain showers evoke
An unexpressed glee
Impulsively I dance
Natives going wild
Nice imagery.
is it sumer already...y i ask...i cant imagine anyting unless i see...and yu hav lovely creativity during winter :)
ReplyDeleteSharla;
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dear...i guess all of us feel the same way...:)
have a great week ahead...:)
Hey HaRy;
ReplyDelete...no summer yet, but since that's a prompt at AO, i need to write as though i am in summer bloom...:)
our place is too cold to feel summery now...:)
have a great week ahead!