Tuesday, January 12, 2010

FACES

Facing a large noisy crowd
And started to sing loud
Catching his breath in high tones
Err he missed the right notes
So his audience booed aloud



Posted by Amity at Tuesday, January 12, 2010
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19 comments:

  1. Ordinary GalTuesday, January 12, 2010 4:17:00 PM

    ohh good... :)

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  2. DayDreamerTuesday, January 12, 2010 5:00:00 PM

    Good Work Amity..

    Try finding me on FB using my e-mail id..

    dev.taurus@gmail.com

    Cheers,,
    Dev

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  3. Melissa aka EquidaeTuesday, January 12, 2010 5:45:00 PM

    good one :) wish you a great day

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  4. Mads...Tuesday, January 12, 2010 7:43:00 PM

    heyy..so simple nd luvly wrds..nw u hav mastered the art..gr8 going dear..!!!

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  5. FreelancerTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:07:00 PM

    this is a nice one...but the sylabble count is all wrong for a limerick dear

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  6. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:28:00 PM

    Hi Ordinary Gal;

    thanks so much!

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  7. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:29:00 PM

    Dev;

    done Dev...:)

    thanks!

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  8. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:33:00 PM

    Melissa;

    thanks dear and wish you the same...:)

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  9. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:35:00 PM

    Mads;

    thanks sweetie, but not so much...and here FL found out some errors in the syllable count, he he he....but I rectified it al...need to be thankful to FL...was confused with the syllable count...:)

    g'nayt...:) Hugs!

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  10. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:36:00 PM

    HI FL;

    yeah, thanks a lot for the observation, done the needed correction, he he he...:)

    now, find out if i got the right syllable count now...!

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  11. WritingsForLifeWednesday, January 13, 2010 4:23:00 AM

    ahh... interesting :-)

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  12. SarasWednesday, January 13, 2010 5:53:00 AM

    Very bicely done Amity. Good job.

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  13. AmityWednesday, January 13, 2010 7:03:00 AM

    Hello Raaji

    thanks so much dear!

    Good morning here...:)

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  14. AmityWednesday, January 13, 2010 7:04:00 AM

    Hi Saras;

    thanks a lot...:)

    good morning!

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  15. FreelancerWednesday, January 13, 2010 10:55:00 PM

    hey amity dear...
    u still didnt correct the second line :)

    it still has 6 syllables

    atleast one less than the norm :)

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  16. AmityThursday, January 14, 2010 2:12:00 AM

    oh really?

    should i be consistent with the syllable count from first to 5th line?

    thanks FL...you should not be doing this, lest am gonna beat you in here...he he he...:) just kidding...:)

    good morning!

    I will again do the correction.

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  17. AmityThursday, January 14, 2010 2:13:00 AM

    please count it again FL..it has 7 syllables already...:)

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  18. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)Tuesday, January 19, 2010 1:48:00 PM

    Nice poem Amity.

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  19. AmityWednesday, January 20, 2010 3:49:00 PM

    Amias;

    thanks so much!

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