Or lend hand
Many are dying
Poor children crying
Asking for alms
Seeking without qualms
Such painful reality
In every country
Opulent must care
Now should share
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Thursday, January 21, 2010
COMPASSION
Can you extend
Or lend hand
Many are dying
Poor children crying
Asking for alms
Seeking without qualms
Such painful reality
In every country
Opulent must care
Now should share
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Or lend hand
Many are dying
Poor children crying
Asking for alms
Seeking without qualms
Such painful reality
In every country
Opulent must care
Now should share
Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
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Very compassionate indeed :)
ReplyDeleteGood choice of words.. a nice Acrostic... :)
ReplyDeleteYou are always so good
ReplyDeletein write the perfect lines :-)
I love it .....
Fantastic choice !!!
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Hey Amity..
ReplyDeleteThese are very compassionate..true..n..heart touching words..
Fabulous Fantastic Lines Dear :) :) Excellent Choice Of Phrases :) :)
ReplyDeleteNice one, Amity..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Acrostic !!
ReplyDeleteLoved the simplicity :)
how compassionate..excellent wrk..!
ReplyDeleteWow..that fit really really well. You are definitely very talented. (:
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done, Amity!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done...I see the compassion in each verse. Lovely acrostic.
ReplyDeleteaww... this is so touching. I wish we could all do that.
ReplyDeletebless the one's who lend their hands!
ReplyDeleteI like this Amity ... I hope you revisit the last line, as it messed with the wonderful flow of this piece.
ReplyDeletetwas really flowing.. nice rhyme too! :)
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