Sunday, January 10, 2010

Indurated




Their relationship has been indurated

by faults
they learnt to forgive
by mistakes
they learnt to realize
by distance
they learnt to accept
by shortcomings
they learnt to fill up
by blames
they learnt to do away with
by fights
they learnt to lessen and avoid
by misunderstandings
they learnt to patch-up immediately

And came up with a healthy and loving relationship!

Written for One Single Impression (Prompt: Indurated)

Posted by Amity at Sunday, January 10, 2010
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46 comments:

  1. FreelancerSunday, January 10, 2010 2:33:00 PM

    wish it was so simple :)
    loved the flow of words

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  2. spacedlawSunday, January 10, 2010 2:53:00 PM

    If only everybody would be that wise!

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  3. AmitySunday, January 10, 2010 3:02:00 PM

    Freelancer;

    ....but it isn't...relationships could be so simply perfect but it's not that simple as we think of...

    thanks to you!

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  4. AmitySunday, January 10, 2010 3:03:00 PM

    Natalie;

    Yeah, we sometimes question why it's not that simple...but then, pride is the culprit all along the way!

    Thanks Natalie...have a great week ahead!

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  5. AmitySunday, January 10, 2010 3:04:00 PM

    Natalie;

    Yeah, we sometimes question why it's not that simple...but then, pride is the culprit all along the way!

    Thanks Natalie...have a great week ahead!

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  6. anthonynorthSunday, January 10, 2010 6:09:00 PM

    There's a lot of wisdom in those words. Excellent.

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  7. S.Sunday, January 10, 2010 6:41:00 PM

    Excellent work sis.

    loved it :)

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  8. Pramoda MeduriSunday, January 10, 2010 6:50:00 PM

    Hey.. hw r u ??

    i loved it..:) .. nice expressions..:) have a happy weekend..

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  9. AmitySunday, January 10, 2010 7:25:00 PM

    Hi Anthony;

    thanks for your kind comments...:)

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  10. AmitySunday, January 10, 2010 7:25:00 PM

    Sunakshi;

    ..thanks Sis, glad u liked it!

    g'nayt!

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  11. AmitySunday, January 10, 2010 7:26:00 PM

    Hi Prams;

    thanks a lot dear...:)

    have a great week ahead!

    Hugs!!!

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  12. Loch RobSunday, January 10, 2010 8:50:00 PM

    Developing a long lasting relationship is all about learning and growing. Also about compassion and forgiveness. So much to learn; indeed.

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  13. SandyCarlsonSunday, January 10, 2010 9:12:00 PM

    Indurated as strengthening is an interesting take. Well done.

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  14. Sherri B.Sunday, January 10, 2010 9:40:00 PM

    I enjoyed your unique take on this prompt...very uplifting!

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  15. JeevesSunday, January 10, 2010 11:36:00 PM

    Very well said. Nice one....

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  16. SarasMonday, January 11, 2010 1:52:00 AM

    I can see your yearning for fellowship and bridging the differences. Very good take on the prompt. Hey, I dont see you visiting, why? Please do.

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  17. MaggieMonday, January 11, 2010 2:19:00 AM

    Anyone or anything worth while is worthy of taking time to learn more as time passes.

    Good take on prompt.

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  18. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 6:29:00 AM

    Rob;

    ...yeah it is, all of us yearn for that kind of relationship...:)

    have a great week ahead!

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  19. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 6:30:00 AM

    Hello Sandy;

    ...thank you so much...:)

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  20. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 10:04:00 AM

    Sweetest in the Gale;

    ..thank you so much!

    :)

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  21. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 10:05:00 AM

    Jeeves;

    ...thanks a lot!

    :)

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  22. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 10:06:00 AM

    Saras;

    ..thanks so much...i will visit, it's just that more often than not, i have poor net connections, in office and at home...:)

    have a great week ahead!

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  23. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 10:06:00 AM

    Maggie;

    yes, it is, thanks Maggie...:)

    have a wonderful week ahead!

    :)

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  24. Tumblewords:Monday, January 11, 2010 12:30:00 PM

    Nicely written, the piece flows to present truth and dreams in a lovely bind.

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  25. totomaiMonday, January 11, 2010 12:56:00 PM

    as they say, every day is a learning experience :-) anybody reading can relate to it

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  26. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 2:31:00 PM

    Hi Brenda;

    ..thanks so much...:)..yes, it is!

    have a lovely week ahead!

    :)

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  27. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 2:36:00 PM

    Totomai;

    yeah, that would be my point, but in reality it's hard bec of pride which is often the culprit!

    have a great week ahead!

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  28. SunshineMonday, January 11, 2010 7:18:00 PM

    Wow. I loved it. Essence of a relationship. Can not agree more with you Amity. Been reading you for a while. But stopped to comment today. You have way with words. Love your blog. Cheers
    - BlueMist

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  29. AmityMonday, January 11, 2010 7:25:00 PM

    Bluemist;

    ...thank you so much and am so glad you liked my posts and this blog of mine!

    cheers, too!

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  30. Mads...Tuesday, January 12, 2010 7:25:00 AM

    oh..m so late HERE..U KNO Wht, was getin updates abt this @ my blog,but i thot i'd already read this nd jus nw realised it was yr pREVIOUS1, NT THIs..ohh my god..! neways,better late than never..
    it's rlly nicely written dear..i could feel the reality, yes, it's wht a relationship teaches..wonderful take dear..hugs 2 uu..!!!

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  31. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 7:39:00 AM

    yeah Madhu, better late than never...:)

    may we learn a lesson or two from this post of mine...well, my intent is to personally learn from what i write and i would be glad if my friends like you can learn from it....:)

    Enjoy the rest of the week!!!

    Hugs!

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  32. AnonymousTuesday, January 12, 2010 3:12:00 PM

    Amity, you always surprise me with your unique style... Keep up the surprises! It is so fun to visit and see what you'll do next. This was a very interesting take on the prompt... Well done!

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  33. AnyaTuesday, January 12, 2010 4:03:00 PM

    Wonderful lines written
    and SO THE TRUTH :-)
    You are very creative with words!!

    (btw. Kareltje is a HE :-)

    Have a wonderful day
    Anya :-)

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  34. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:42:00 PM

    Hi April (Shadowplay);

    Hmmm....don't you know that my unique style is writing simply simple...that's it! yeah, it is...:)
    I so lack some high sounding words, thus i end up writing as simple as this.

    thanks dear for your kind comments, and hope you will come back again!

    g'nayt...:)

    P.S. have you started writing your work of fiction? I am excited to read it now....:)

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  35. AmityTuesday, January 12, 2010 8:45:00 PM

    Hello dear Anya;

    so Kareltje is a he! he is so cutie and cuddly...:) am contemplating of raising my own Kareltje whenever i see lovely pics of both of you...:)

    and yes, am so elated of your kind comments in my blogs!

    still snowing in your place?

    g'nayt...:) sweet dreams...:)

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  36. zoya gautamWednesday, January 13, 2010 2:20:00 AM

    surely a gentle path to tread ..great thoughts

    ( the meanings u refer to are included below my writeup / )

    thanks for writing this ..

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  37. AmityWednesday, January 13, 2010 7:05:00 AM

    Hi Zoya;

    thanks a lot...:)

    yeah, i may not have noticed it...but tried to look on their meanings on upper portion of your post...:)

    be right there to see what those words mean!

    good morning!

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  38. JimWednesday, January 13, 2010 2:29:00 PM

    Amity, you have potrayed the love life of television Beaver's parents, June and Ward Cleaver.
    It's very nice, your characters are cemented in love.
    ..

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  39. AmityWednesday, January 13, 2010 3:48:00 PM

    Jim,

    thanks a lot. but i do not have knowledge about that Beaver's parents (tv characters)

    but thanks for letting me know!

    a relationship is surely perfect if indurated in these ways!

    Have you read my acrostics at AO?

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  40. hopeWednesday, January 13, 2010 10:53:00 PM

    Lovely!! wish everyone learn from their mistakes same way.. :)

    You are so very creative Amity :) I love reading your blog and thoughts..

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  41. AmityThursday, January 14, 2010 2:09:00 AM

    Hope,

    thanks lil' girl...:)

    me, too, I like ur posts, i feel young reading them? well, it's obvious in my comments huh!

    good morning!

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  42. Cassiopeia RisesThursday, January 14, 2010 6:54:00 AM

    Excellent use of prompt. Would that all love was so. Well done.

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  43. AmityThursday, January 14, 2010 7:19:00 AM

    Hi Cassiopeia;

    I guess everyone wishes to but that is almost perfect, isn't it?

    And perfect relationships happen only in fairytales?

    Good morning...:)

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  44. PattiThursday, January 14, 2010 9:38:00 AM

    Love it! I read your comment on Jim's post and did not realize that the word meant "strengthened" as well as hardened. I went with hardened for my haiku, but I like what you did!

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  45. AmityThursday, January 14, 2010 10:05:00 AM

    Hi Patti;

    Yeah, I did have to consult a dictionary, a thesaurus for the meaning and what came up was that indurated is synonymous to strengthened, hence that was where I started thinking what to write.

    Thanks so much you love it Patti!

    Have a nice day!

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  46. AnonymousFriday, January 15, 2010 7:08:00 AM

    there is nothing so free as hard work and loving someone...there is nothing so beautiful as hope...thank you

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