Tuesday, March 09, 2010

CHILD ABUSE

Close to almost death
He suffered bruises, pains
In parents' cruel hands
Leading to trauma forever
Destroying his self-worth

And his normal growth
Blighting his bright future
Until he becomes a
Social and family problem
Enslaved by lifetime fear

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only
Photo Courtesy

Posted by Amity at Tuesday, March 09, 2010
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20 comments:

  1. CreativityTuesday, March 09, 2010 11:16:00 PM

    Fantastic Write Up :) :)

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  2. AnonymousWednesday, March 10, 2010 12:37:00 AM

    wonderful work Amity!

    Sorry about facebook.

    I can not concentrate on too many things so i am off facebook for now.

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  3. AnonymousWednesday, March 10, 2010 4:25:00 AM

    You pretty much hit the nail on the head with this one. Been there and done that.

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  4. AnyaWednesday, March 10, 2010 5:52:00 AM

    Touching photo :(
    Poor child !!

    Touching words ...

    ~ Fear is only as deep
    as the mind allows ~

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  5. Melissa aka EquidaeWednesday, March 10, 2010 3:48:00 PM

    it was beautifully written for such harsh a subject.... left you an award on my blog

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  6. SarasThursday, March 11, 2010 1:42:00 PM

    Very well done, Amity.

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  7. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)Saturday, March 13, 2010 5:22:00 AM

    You painted the picture with your words, but the graphic took it home. Very well done Amity, very well said!

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  8. vidyaSaturday, March 13, 2010 6:58:00 AM

    very nicely written, Amity

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  9. Vinay Leo R.Saturday, March 20, 2010 2:09:00 PM

    yeah i agree with Amias..
    the pic did it for me.. took me over the edge of sorts.. so damn painful!

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  10. Ofira SephirothMonday, March 22, 2010 3:25:00 AM

    Awesome poem, love you word usage and the last line wraps the whole poem up nicely.

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  11. AmityMonday, March 22, 2010 6:41:00 AM

    Sahana;

    Thanks a lot! Good morning...:))

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  12. AmityMonday, March 22, 2010 6:42:00 AM

    Shraddha;

    Thanks a lot...:) About FV, it's okAY!

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  13. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:25:00 AM

    Gavin;

    Oh really, sorry about that!

    Thanks so much!

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  14. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:26:00 AM

    Anya;

    yes dear, what you said is true!

    thanks so much!

    :)

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  15. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:27:00 AM

    Melissa;

    Thanks dear and also for the award!

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  16. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:27:00 AM

    Saras;

    Thank you!

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  17. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:27:00 AM

    Amias;

    Thank you, thank you so much!

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  18. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:28:00 AM

    Vidya;

    Thanks dear!

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  19. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:28:00 AM

    Leo;

    Thanks a lot, am so glad it really hit you!

    :)

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  20. AmityThursday, March 25, 2010 9:29:00 AM

    Ofira;

    Thanks so much dear!

    :)

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