Monday, March 15, 2010

Even Just for A Moment..........


Escape I seek today
from the narrow confines
of my sullen mind...

I hate to linger in this
but it hits me like shards
from time to time.....

Why do I hesitate
why does my mind goes weary 
and becomes an empty space

Maybe this heart of mine
needs an inspiration of thine
that would propel my mind
and my pulse to beat

to greater heights
to thoughts divine
to unknown spaces
to beautiful places

that will give thoughts,
ideas, feelings and emotions...

Will you come then
and inspire me now

I need your enchantment
your magic wand

Cast your spell now
Even just for a moment?



Written for 3WW (Prompt: Pulse, Shard, Weary)

39 comments:

  1. hey amity,

    well expressed..i wonder abt ur age and ur feelings .. hehe ..inspiring..:)

    why the question mark was thr at the end? couldnt get..

    thanks for sharing this..:)

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  2. hi Amity, you are continuing to cast ur spell eh? good good! even I wonder abt ur age.. are u really granny Amity? ;) :D u sound not so though!

    keep writing!

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  3. Amity,
    That was really cool,with an empty mind u created something on an empty mind seeking for inspiration.
    Hey! thats an inspiration for the world friend,especially people like me where situations set priorities that doesnt give much space to write...good one from you :)

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  4. Hey Prams;

    yeyyy...glad ur back here in my space...:)

    weeewwww...askin' my age, well am in my middle life now but thinks and feels like....you know what!

    Sorry about missing your blog for so a long time...as I have told you why....:)

    Good morning!

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  5. Leo;

    Cast spell huh!

    You may have seen some revisions I made just now, if only to make it to 3WW's prompts this week...:) Hopefully, it did not alter the thought at all...I also read your Reality Check now...50th? Great!

    Have a nice working day!

    Your granny;

    Amitea

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  6. Leo;

    Cast spell huh!

    You may have seen some revisions I made just now, if only to make it to 3WW's prompts this week...:) Hopefully, it did not alter the thought at all...I also read your Reality Check now...50th? Great!

    Have a nice working day!

    Your granny;

    Amitea

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  7. Hey Readers Dais;

    Your first time here I guess, I dunno how you came through...but anyways...thanks so much!

    Yeah, glad u like it and I was able to create something from an empty mind....:)

    Thanks again...:)

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  8. Wonderful expressions spoken here.

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  9. That inspiration is still there. Nicely done.

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  10. We often need that flash of inspiration.

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  11. Anthony;

    I guess so...thank you so much!

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  12. ur soo good expressing through words..loved it..

    urs..hemu..

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  13. Nice work. I could feel some desperation in the writing, a wanting for things to be better.

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  14. Fill your mind with light, happiness,
    hope, feelings of security and strength,
    and soon your life will reflect these qualities :-)

    ((hugs))

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  15. Hey Hems;

    Long time no see...he he he...:)

    Thanks for dropping by...and glad u liked this piece...:)

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  16. Hi Angel;

    Yeah, very, very true!

    We often get some kind of desperation every now and then... :)

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  17. Anya;

    Thanks for the kind words and for the love...:) and for the hugs!!!

    Hugs too,

    Amity

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  18. Hi Amity, Love the divine 'thine' and the way you wrote this up!!

    Thanks for the follow!

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  19. That's really beautiful. It says a lot about you. Unlike others, you express yourself really well. That's really good. Keep coming back to 3WW :)

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  20. I never realized you posted this one. I'm so annoyed with blogger. It's been acting up for almost two weeks now. It's just now actually deciding to load your page. But anyways....I loved this piece. I'm in a bit of a dry spell right now and this piece encouraged me to try writing again. (:

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  21. Andy;

    Thanks so much!

    And thanks for the follow, too!

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  22. Anonymouslysecret;

    Thanks so much...:)

    Yes, I will try... :)

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  23. Gavin;

    Yeah, sure, why not!

    It happens, and when it does, we can't pen a word or two!

    "Writer's block" is too hifalutin to use!

    Thanks for the follow!

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  24. strangely mirrors my state of mind right now, well expressed


    thanks for your visit to my 3WW

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  25. Hi Carina;

    Thanks a bunch, too!

    Have a wonderful weekend... :)

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  26. Lissa;

    Hey, I am not alone then!

    Thanks for your visit!

    Have a great weekend...:)

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  27. Very nicely done! An exciting escape does one well every now and again.

    I missed out on your debut week, so welcome to 3ww!

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  28. Hi Jay;


    Good morning!

    Thanks for dropping by...:)

    Yeah, this is my second week at 3WW!

    Have a beautiful Sunday!

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  29. Delightful! An escape now and then is what's needed for sure!

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  30. Cast your spell now
    Even just for a moment?
    we all need that don't we? Loved it.

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  31. Hi Sue;

    I am so sure of that feelings...

    Thanks so much!

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  32. Hi Dee;

    Yeah, that's so true...we badly need some magic spells to make our mind work for the best!

    Glad you love it and thank you so much!

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  33. Hi Dee;

    Yeah, that's so true...we badly need some magic spells to make our mind work for the best!

    Glad you love it and thank you so much!

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  34. Hi Dee;

    Yeah, that's so true...we badly need some magic spells to make our mind work for the best!

    Glad you love it and thank you so much!

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