When I am down and feeling low
He gives me His shoulder to cry on
When I am hopeless and discouraged
He gives me hope and courage
When problems arise manifold
He shows me answers untold
When I am hurt and in pain
He pacifies me without fail
When I feel like giving up
He encourages me never to let up
When the road ahead seems dark
He shows light and a beautiful spark
When friends seem to ignore and leave one by one
He gives new ones to provide genuine fun
When I am subdued by my fears
He calms me like a child so dear
He is there like a sun during the day
When I am happy and gay
Like a moon in the night
When I am low and in fright
Till the stars, moon and sun
No longer shine and warm the sky
He is my all in all
Through thick and thin
In joys and in tears
One can never surpass
Willing ever to listen when I talk
Pat me to move on when I baulk
And He could make wonders
In this mess of a life I have!
All my sins forgiven and become weightless
I will in His eyes be spotless
All my sins forgiven and become weightless
I will in His eyes be spotless
I will love Him till the end
My best friend, my all in all!
My best ever-friend!
Written for Three Word Wednesday (Prompts: ignore, fear, weightless)
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Admire and envy a bit your faith :)
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So so lovely written
ReplyDeleteIt comes straight from your heart ♥
Sometimes in life,
you find a special friend.
Someone who changes your life
just by being part of it.
Someone who makes you laugh
until you can't stop.
Someone who makes you believe
that there really is good in the world.
Someone who convinces you
that there really is an unlocked door
just waiting for you to open it .....
:)
Kareltje send you cuddles
=^.^=
That's a beautiful tribute.
ReplyDeleteYour faith speaks volumes. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful post but what else can a mom expect from her daughter..lol
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem which was a pleasure to read.
Take care.
Yvonne.
Lovely images of faith and comfort.
ReplyDeleteDear Amity,
ReplyDeleteNAMASTE!
Good Evening!
I am so happy,you have the special friend,
To bring that sunshine smile,
To wipe away the tear drops,
To see that you are in high spirits,
And to encourage you to go creative,
Blessed you are, my dear,
You have the strong shoulder to lean on!
Praise the Lord,that he remains,
Forever with you!
Love you dear,
Hugs and Prayers,
Sasneham,
Anu
Woww!!!!!!!! No Words To Tell, How Liked This Poem.....Its Measureless, Its Value is Priceless.......
ReplyDeleteExcellent Beautiful, Fantastic, Fabulous Write Up Dear :) :)
Lovely & Touching :) :)
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really a very special friendship. well said Amity..
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely expression of your belief. Good 3WW.
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Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYour faith is inspiring...your expressing of that faith well done.
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The peace that passes all understanding!
ReplyDeleteThis is beyond our dreams!!
Nicely!!!
Hi Pia;
ReplyDeleteYou can have the same faith Pia..:)
Welcome to Dreams....it's your first I guess!
Hope you will come back again!
Thanks so much!
Amity this is a wonderful psalm to Him! A heart revealed, clothed with sincerity. I too envy your faith and closeness. One day I'll get there.
ReplyDeleteThough the world may abandon you He will never leave nor forsake. :)
You are an inspiration.
Hi Anya;
ReplyDeleteYou amazed me here...you shared a very beautiful poem itself....:)
Anya...keep writing such thoughts you have and share it with us!
HUgs dear and hugs to kareltje! ^.^
Anthony;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
ThomG;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
ThomG;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
ThomG;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
nicely written...btw i gifted a big teddy to my best frnd some day before hehe :)!!
ReplyDeleteOnce I had a visit/vision where my BFF (God) sat on my bed in tears and said "I feel your pain and will never leave you" as he held me. This poem was AWESOME.
ReplyDeleteFriendship is the reward of faith.
ReplyDeleteHi Mommy Yvonne;
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Mom!
Yeah you are right!
Good morning....:)
Hi Carina;
ReplyDeleteYeah, it is! And all of us should!
Thanks so much! :)
Hi Anu;
ReplyDeleteYes, you said it right! He is really everything to me! No one can ever surpass...:)
Do you have a friend such as mine?
Thanks dear for your wonderful comments!
Hugs!
Hello Sahana;
ReplyDeleteHmmm...u mesmerize me with your comments...:) I am drowning with so much compliments from you!
Yeah, the gift? I will claim it soonest and will add in my awards archive...:)
Thanks dear...:) Hugs! ^.^
Hello Leo;
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed, a very special friendship!
Thank you so much! :)
Hi Angel;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
Hi Grandma,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Dreams.... :)
Yes, it is! Thank you so much...:)
I will soon visit yours...:)
Good morning!
Hi Radio Nowhere;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! Glad you appreciated it!
So beautiful and so needed tonight.
ReplyDeleteHi Andy;
ReplyDeleteShall keep our hearts and minds through Christ Jesus...whatsoever things are true!......I know that song! :)
Thanks so much! Glad you like it!
Hi Sharla;
ReplyDeleteI could only smile...:) for such a wonderful comment from you dear!
Get there soon my dear, don't delay, and it will be pure bliss with Him! Worries and burdens He will carry for you, that's how He loves us, unconditionally even!
Thanks so much! Hugs!
Hi Paramveer;
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Dreams...:)
That teddy bear you gifted will be a treasure for the receiver...:)
That is, if she is really your bestest of friend! (BFF)...:)
Thanks for dropping by...:) Hope you will come back!
Good morning!
Hi Tammy;
ReplyDeleteI know that feeling, been into it and like you, I really felt His wonderful presence! Nothing can compare, isn't it!
Thank you so much! You, too are AWESOME!
Hi Stan;
ReplyDeleteYes, in Him it is! Unquestionable!
Thanks so much!
Sandy;
ReplyDeleteOh really? I am glad it did help you in a way!
Thanks dear! Let us not waver in our faith and love with Him!
He is the best, right?
heartfelt piece,
ReplyDeletewhat talent!
Hey - very beautifully painted...i think your words were quite visual...they flow nicely. quite liked it.
ReplyDeleteHi Jingle;
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! Glad you like it! :)
Hi Gyanban;
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton! Glad you liked it completely!
Have a nice day!
May God help me be a friend like that..Thanks Amity.. I learnt what kind of a friend one need to be..will follow you form hereon.. and thanks for visiting me.. it inspires..
ReplyDeleteHi Ramesh;
ReplyDeleteThanks Ramesh, will return the compliment, I will follow you through OSI...:)
Thanks again!
Wow. This is beautiful writing. I truly enjoyed it...:)
ReplyDeleteI am your newest follower. Have a good day.
A most wonderful read.... and the message just came accross very very well... i know, you had a wonderful time writin' this poem... very well dedicated...!!!:)
ReplyDeleteGood day!!!:)
>kelvin
What a beautiful piece! Very powerful.
ReplyDelete-Tim
http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/05/adepta-sororitas.html
This is beautiful Amity! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you also for the comment on my page!
Hi Kelvin;
ReplyDeleteYes, I did have a great time and enjoyed writing it, it just flows from the heart...:)
Thanks son, for following! :)
Tim;
ReplyDeleteHi! Thank you so much. Glad you liked it! :)
Hello Jay;
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton! Glad you like it!
Oh sure, don't mention it, I am also grateful for you for reading my piece!
Good morning!
Hi Amity,
ReplyDeleteGuess this is my first visit on ur blog....Its lovely i must say..
Loved this piece...m glad u have a friend like that.
Have a nice time...C u around on 3WW. :)
Lovely - the way you incorporated the three word wednesday words in a poem that seems to have written itself through a sacred conversation, absolutely lovely.
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it is wonderful to read the praises and worship of your faith... reminds me of that song what a friend we have in jesus
ReplyDeleteHi Songofsea;
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Dreams and thank you so much for coming by...:)
Yeah, I am a regular at 3WW...thanks to Leo for introducing me there!
See you again today at 3WW!
Have a nice day!
Hi Julie;
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...:) Incorporating the three words in a poem is quite a challenge but I do enjoy doing it! Also, I have done it in short stories for a couple of times now...:)
Glad you like! Have a nice day...:)
Hi Pieceofpie;
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear...yeah, true of what you said!
Friends like that are rare! In the mortal world I mean!
See you at 3WW...:)