Thursday, January 21, 2010

COMPASSION

Can you extend
Or lend hand
Many are dying
Poor children crying
Asking for alms
Seeking without qualms
Such painful reality
In every country
Opulent must care
Now should share

Written for Amias' Acrostic Only

15 comments:

  1. Good choice of words.. a nice Acrostic... :)

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  2. You are always so good
    in write the perfect lines :-)
    I love it .....
    Fantastic choice !!!

    (@^.^@)

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  3. Hey Amity..

    These are very compassionate..true..n..heart touching words..

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  4. Fabulous Fantastic Lines Dear :) :) Excellent Choice Of Phrases :) :)

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  5. Beautiful Acrostic !!
    Loved the simplicity :)

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  6. Wow..that fit really really well. You are definitely very talented. (:

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  7. Beautifully done...I see the compassion in each verse. Lovely acrostic.

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  8. aww... this is so touching. I wish we could all do that.

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  9. bless the one's who lend their hands!

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  10. I like this Amity ... I hope you revisit the last line, as it messed with the wonderful flow of this piece.

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