Tuesday, January 12, 2010

FACES

Facing a large noisy crowd
And started to sing loud
Catching his breath in high tones
Err he missed the right notes
So his audience booed aloud



19 comments:

  1. Good Work Amity..

    Try finding me on FB using my e-mail id..

    dev.taurus@gmail.com

    Cheers,,
    Dev

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  2. heyy..so simple nd luvly wrds..nw u hav mastered the art..gr8 going dear..!!!

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  3. this is a nice one...but the sylabble count is all wrong for a limerick dear

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  4. Melissa;

    thanks dear and wish you the same...:)

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  5. Mads;

    thanks sweetie, but not so much...and here FL found out some errors in the syllable count, he he he....but I rectified it al...need to be thankful to FL...was confused with the syllable count...:)

    g'nayt...:) Hugs!

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  6. HI FL;

    yeah, thanks a lot for the observation, done the needed correction, he he he...:)

    now, find out if i got the right syllable count now...!

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  7. Hello Raaji

    thanks so much dear!

    Good morning here...:)

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  8. Hi Saras;

    thanks a lot...:)

    good morning!

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  9. hey amity dear...
    u still didnt correct the second line :)

    it still has 6 syllables

    atleast one less than the norm :)

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  10. oh really?

    should i be consistent with the syllable count from first to 5th line?

    thanks FL...you should not be doing this, lest am gonna beat you in here...he he he...:) just kidding...:)

    good morning!

    I will again do the correction.

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  11. please count it again FL..it has 7 syllables already...:)

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