Wednesday, September 30, 2009

TEARS


They stained my pillow and
Etched the heartaches
And agonies that almost
Ruined my
Self-worth




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12 comments:

  1. wow.. that was powerful, dear. Really good work :)

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  2. thanks Lena...

    i guess am really improving here, he he he.

    :)

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  3. oh wow! this is real powerful work Amity! kudos to u! :)

    this'll be tough competition to beat! :)

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  4. hey..nice one..

    hope every thing is fine with u and this is just a thought..:)

    take care..

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  5. hey Leo,

    ha ha ha, of course i can't ever beat my silent mentor...

    why don't you try to launch a contest and i'd be the first to submit an entry? he he he

    you know son, to me you're still the best poet i've ever met...

    your comments on my works are just as inspiring you know!
    :)

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  6. KP Dear,

    thanks...and am happy of your visibility again on my site...

    more of this to come, promise!!!

    nice day to you!

    :)

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  7. Hello Prams,

    of course am fine dear, but sometimes, at one point in our life, we suffer innuendos such as this...

    i'll be fine promise!

    i miss you really and also Vyshu...

    what happened to Vyshu? i can't access her site? could you help me?

    thanks and have a nice day!

    HUGS:)

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  8. this acrostic is really wonderful :)

    wish i cud write one :)

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  9. To you solitary writer,

    i know you can, just try because that's what i did...

    thanks for droppin' by my site...wish you would come back again...

    :)

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  10. I know this feeling, you did very well on this one.

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  11. thanks Amias...

    i wish to read new post from you, too!

    nice day ahead!

    :)

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