From a sheltered moth
Grew into an ugly worm
And metamorphosed
Came a beautiful butterfly.
From a minute egg
Fertilized by a sperm
A fetus developed
Came out a cuddly baby.
From a small seed
Planted into earth
Watered by nature
Came a beautiful flower.
From fragile eggs
Hatched by a mother hen
After several days
Came out healthy chicks.
From a dirty mud
Gathered with bare hands
Shaped by artistic mind
Came a beautiful vase.
From a farmer's hand
Who plowed day in, day out
And worked with sweat and blood
Came a beautiful farm.
From a loving mother
Who taught her kids good deeds
Manners and values
Came responsible citizens.
From a writer's thoughts
Ideas, dreams and emotions
Woven into poetic words
Came her masterpiece.
woww..Amityy..this was superb..amalgamation of beauty nd creativity..luved it from the core..hats off to yr imagination dear..how b'ful it was..u r damn creative..:)
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday..
hugs n luv..:)
tats some imagination dear...u had a post abt feelings motions..it's kindaa similar a small thought describing the complex reality..i like it :):)
ReplyDeleteemotions*
ReplyDeleteits sooooooooo beautiful...each picture explanation was so lovely done.....so nice amity :)...
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
Each metamorphosis leads to a thing of beauty.Wonderful write Amity. Last stanza was well said.
ReplyDeleteThis too, teaches me. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteSimple Amity
ReplyDeleteMetamorphoses into a
Lively Poetess
Day by Day
You planted many good seeds in this poem...wonderful.
ReplyDeleteYou didn't need the pictures, your words were very visual and creatively painted the pictures in my mind.
ReplyDelete"Came this post, her own masterpiece"
reads much better ...
"Came her masterpiece"
It keeps the flow. Hope you don't mine this suggestion, I like it as it is, but the very last line mess with the perfect flow.
Love the new font, so easy to read.
Hi Maddy;
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo...much! Am so happy you liked it!
good morning!
Hi Priya;
ReplyDeletethank you so much dear!
yeah 'emotions', lots of it!
good morning!
Hems;
ReplyDeletethanks a lotttt.....you liked my post!
good morning!
Good morning Swapna;
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dear...:)
:)
Hi Moe;
ReplyDeleteyeah it does, all of us!
good morning!
:)
Hi Saras;
ReplyDeletei wonder how you could always comment in verses, and acros form....free style, you name it!
lotta thanks!
good morning!
Hello Maggie;
ReplyDeletegood morning!
thanks dear you liked it so much!
:)
Hello Big Sis Amias;
ReplyDeleteI always consider your worthy comments as a sign of love and here, I have changed the last line to your suggestion. Well done dear!
and the pics, yeah, they need not be there but I thought of adding color to the post! only serves my purpose.
thanks a lot Big Sis. love yah!
good morning!
Didn't mean to say the pictures weren't beautiful, just wanted you to know that your words --- your masterpiece was just as beautiful, and stood on its own.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures and the poem complement each other --- I liked your choices, very creative!
Thank you so much Big Sis Amias...
ReplyDeleteas always you are my guiding star, my loving mentor!
I love you for that!
have a great week ahead...:)
:)
beautiful !! :)
ReplyDelete.. very good to read ..
ReplyDeletemany thanks ..
Wonderfully well crafted creativity!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely, and very creative poem!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Pratsie;
ReplyDeletethanks dear!
Zoya,
ReplyDeletethanks to you, too!
have a nice day!
Tumblewords;
ReplyDeletethanks dear!
:)
Hi Patti;
ReplyDeletethanks for the wonderful comment!
have a nice day!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wondeful thinkin!
ReplyDeleteLoved each and every line :)