One misty, beautiful morning
While the sun is busy rising in the horizon
I walked through a lovely and colorful garden
Full of flowers and butterflies galore
I smelled each flower that caught my fancy
And tried to touch the butterflies around me
But there's one butterfly that seemed to stand out in the crowd
And tried to flip its wings, making circles around
Then I suddenly heard a beautiful voice
Such a familiar, caring and tender voice
He seemed to whisper some familiar words
While I intently listened and tried to decipher
What the voice wanted to impart to me
Then the voice suddenly whispered and lovingly said.....
"I'll forever love you Amity,
That has been my pledge,
I've promised to behold such a wonderful vow
And here I am now to remind you of that
For I am your beloved who lived in the past
Reincarnated through this butterfly you adore
And just to be with you now
Though I belong
Though I belong
To a different world".
Written for One Single Impression prompt
ur love towards nature has been expressed in this post through ir words.. wonderful journey of min though the garden on ur words..
ReplyDeleteThanks dear..
Being close to nature has its magical moments, right?
ReplyDeletethis truly shows that love is Eternal....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.. Loved it !!
lovely thsks for making me drean
ReplyDeleteVery chweet u know... can't be better than this :)
ReplyDeletei can smell the rose in ur words...beautifully expressed amity :)...
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
a-w-e-s-o-m-e........
ReplyDeletewat else do i say dear..?
loved the way u described dawn..
A beautiful poem as always
ReplyDeleteawsumm Amityy..so sweet..luvin nature, u've depicted wid such luvlyy words..b'ful..:)
ReplyDeleteu owe a mindlowin poetic skill..:)keep it upp..:)
Great one :) :) :) I love the topic you chose :)
ReplyDeleteOur heart's desire ... the eternal love of our match ...
ReplyDeletebeautifully captured.
peace,
jp/deb
Hello Prams,
ReplyDeleteyes, it is my dear...:)
thanks so much....:)
love yah!
Aniket;
ReplyDeleteyes, Aniket, you're exactly right! hope you love nature, too!
Stardust;
ReplyDeletethank you so much...:)
Melissa;
ReplyDeleteit's a treat Melissa!
:)
The oneness with nature beautifully described.
ReplyDeleteAnthony;
ReplyDelete...thank you so much...:)
Hi Meow...
ReplyDeletechenk kyu tso mats...err...we've got new language to learn here...:)
love yah Meow!
Hems;
ReplyDeleteyeah, really? that would be inspiring to hear...:)
thanks Hem...:)
Hi Priya;
ReplyDeletethanks, thanks a lot my dear...:)
g'nayt, sweet dreams...:)
Kp,
ReplyDelete...thank you Sir!
:)
Hello Maddhu;
ReplyDeleteOh really? sure, sure, and thanks a lottt.....:)
hugs to you!
g'nayt!
:)
Hi Roshni;
ReplyDeletehello dear...thanks a lot...:)
love yah!
Hi JP;
ReplyDeletethanks so much...yeah, that's true, we'd wish for an eternal love from our match!
:)
Enjoyed the photos and I can relate to the voices.
ReplyDeleteHello Maggie,
ReplyDelete...thanks a lotttt....love yah for being able to relate to my post!
Very romantic and heart felt. Will we always find our soul mate through time? I would like to think so.
ReplyDeleteHi Rob;
ReplyDelete...wow...really? yeah, me too, would like to think it that way...:)
g'morning!
it is very beautiful Amity! :)
ReplyDeletenice nice reincarnation take!
Oh this was so very enjoyable ... and I so love butterflies! Great take on the prompt Amity Me .. you are becoming such a wonderful poet!
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing what happens when we really listen. So much out there has so much to say, and how lovely that someone loves you so much!
ReplyDeleteI loved the comfort and joy in this poem...butterflies truly are magical. Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteAmi, this is good. If I were to be incarnated I might like to be a butterfly since I can't be a fooie foo bird. [I don't believe in reincarnation so I guess I couldn't be either.]
ReplyDelete..
Leo;
ReplyDelete...Thank you so much!
:)
Amias,
ReplyDeleteOh really Amias? Ca'nt believe you said that. I would be more challenged again...:)
g'morning here in the Philippines...:)
:)
Amias,
ReplyDeleteOh really Amias? Ca'nt believe you said that. I would be more challenged again...:)
g'morning here in the Philippines...:)
:)
Jukota;
ReplyDelete...when i wrote this, I pretended it to be real, just fiction Jukota, but thanks you loved it like all the others who read it...:)
good morning from the Island of Luzon, Phils...:)
love yah!
Sweetest in the Gale;
ReplyDelete...me, too! and when I wrote it I was so amazed at how I was able to put my thoughts inti words...:)
thanks to you dear!
g'morning...:)
Hi Jim;
ReplyDeleteg'morning...:)
..of course I don't believe, too. that was just pure fiction you know!
but should i really believe in it, butterfly would be my first choice...:)
A beautiful promise!
ReplyDeleteHello Sandy;
ReplyDeleteg'morning....:)
yes, it is! thanks Sandy! but this is just pure fiction...:)
very beautifully put thru..nature is the best way to express oneself..isnt it??
ReplyDeleteGosh !! this was just so much touching !!
ReplyDeletePassionMust;
ReplyDeleteg'morning...:)
yes, it is and that i also really love nature!
have a nice day!
Hi PS the Pratsie;
ReplyDeleteno more PS De Abb....?
yes, it is...:)
miss yah!
Aw, sweet and lovely!
ReplyDeleteAmazing.. wonderful work.. the best so far on this prompt.. seems coming straight from heart.. :)
ReplyDeletelovely..
"and belong to you now though through a different world." lovely...and the photo of the butterfly, lovely as well.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet take on prompt. An unknown love from some past. Perhaps someday you will both be on the same side of time.
ReplyDeletelove, Melanie
So very sweet...
ReplyDeletetime and time again
Kill Word Verification
Tumblewords;
ReplyDeleteGood morning!
...thanks so much!
:)
Dear Hope;
ReplyDeletethank you so much, you really appreciated it! Yeah, it really comes from the heart!
g'morning!
Dear Hope;
ReplyDeletethank you so much, you really appreciated it! Yeah, it really comes from the heart!
g'morning!
Dear Hope;
ReplyDeletethank you so much, you really appreciated it! Yeah, it really comes from the heart!
g'morning!
Hi Deowriter;
ReplyDeleteyeah, it's really beautiful...:)
thanks to you!
Hello Cassiopheaia,
ReplyDelete...thanks dear, and I really wish that someday, I will be with my beloved!
g'morning!
Gautami,
ReplyDeletethanks so much...:)
what do you mean by Kill Word Verification?
have a nice daY!
Such a delicate drifting of souls in this sunlit garden! And who but the butterfly, symbolic of transformation, to lite on your outstretched hand. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteHi Gabrielle;
ReplyDeletethanks so much!
we always hear butterflies as symbolic of reincarnation that's why i thought it to write that way!
thanks so much!
Hi Gabrielle;
ReplyDeletethanks so much!
we always hear butterflies as symbolic of reincarnation that's why i thought it to write that way!
thanks so much!
What a lovely poem- it speaks of such hope~ thanks!
ReplyDeleteHi Patti;
ReplyDelete...thanks to you also!
have a nice day!