Saturday, November 14, 2009

My Beloved Reincarnated


One misty, beautiful morning
While the sun is busy rising in the horizon
I walked through a lovely and colorful garden
Full of flowers and butterflies galore
I smelled each flower that caught my fancy
And tried to touch the butterflies around me
But there's one butterfly that seemed to stand out in the crowd
And tried to flip its wings, making circles around
Then I suddenly heard a beautiful voice
Such a familiar, caring and tender voice
He seemed to whisper some familiar words
While I intently listened and tried to decipher
What the voice wanted to impart to me
Then the voice suddenly whispered and lovingly said.....




"I'll forever love you Amity,
That has been my pledge,
I've promised to behold such a wonderful vow
And here I am now to remind you of that
For I am your beloved who lived in the past 
Reincarnated through this butterfly you adore
And just to be with you now 
Though I belong
To a different world".


Written for One Single Impression prompt

62 comments:

  1. ur love towards nature has been expressed in this post through ir words.. wonderful journey of min though the garden on ur words..

    Thanks dear..

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  2. Being close to nature has its magical moments, right?

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  3. this truly shows that love is Eternal....
    Beautiful poem.. Loved it !!

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  4. Very chweet u know... can't be better than this :)

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  5. i can smell the rose in ur words...beautifully expressed amity :)...

    urs..hemu..

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  6. a-w-e-s-o-m-e........
    wat else do i say dear..?

    loved the way u described dawn..

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  7. awsumm Amityy..so sweet..luvin nature, u've depicted wid such luvlyy words..b'ful..:)
    u owe a mindlowin poetic skill..:)keep it upp..:)

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  8. Great one :) :) :) I love the topic you chose :)

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  9. Our heart's desire ... the eternal love of our match ...

    beautifully captured.

    peace,
    jp/deb

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  10. Hello Prams,

    yes, it is my dear...:)

    thanks so much....:)

    love yah!

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  11. Aniket;

    yes, Aniket, you're exactly right! hope you love nature, too!

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  12. The oneness with nature beautifully described.

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  13. Hi Meow...

    chenk kyu tso mats...err...we've got new language to learn here...:)

    love yah Meow!

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  14. Hems;

    yeah, really? that would be inspiring to hear...:)

    thanks Hem...:)

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  15. Hi Priya;

    thanks, thanks a lot my dear...:)

    g'nayt, sweet dreams...:)

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  16. Hello Maddhu;

    Oh really? sure, sure, and thanks a lottt.....:)

    hugs to you!

    g'nayt!

    :)

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  17. Hi Roshni;

    hello dear...thanks a lot...:)

    love yah!

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  18. Hi JP;

    thanks so much...yeah, that's true, we'd wish for an eternal love from our match!

    :)

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  19. Enjoyed the photos and I can relate to the voices.

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  20. Hello Maggie,

    ...thanks a lotttt....love yah for being able to relate to my post!

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  21. Very romantic and heart felt. Will we always find our soul mate through time? I would like to think so.

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  22. Hi Rob;

    ...wow...really? yeah, me too, would like to think it that way...:)

    g'morning!

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  23. it is very beautiful Amity! :)
    nice nice reincarnation take!

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  24. Oh this was so very enjoyable ... and I so love butterflies! Great take on the prompt Amity Me .. you are becoming such a wonderful poet!

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  25. It's amazing what happens when we really listen. So much out there has so much to say, and how lovely that someone loves you so much!

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  26. I loved the comfort and joy in this poem...butterflies truly are magical. Beautifully done!

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  27. Ami, this is good. If I were to be incarnated I might like to be a butterfly since I can't be a fooie foo bird. [I don't believe in reincarnation so I guess I couldn't be either.]
    ..

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  28. Amias,

    Oh really Amias? Ca'nt believe you said that. I would be more challenged again...:)

    g'morning here in the Philippines...:)

    :)

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  29. Amias,

    Oh really Amias? Ca'nt believe you said that. I would be more challenged again...:)

    g'morning here in the Philippines...:)

    :)

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  30. Jukota;

    ...when i wrote this, I pretended it to be real, just fiction Jukota, but thanks you loved it like all the others who read it...:)

    good morning from the Island of Luzon, Phils...:)

    love yah!

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  31. Sweetest in the Gale;

    ...me, too! and when I wrote it I was so amazed at how I was able to put my thoughts inti words...:)

    thanks to you dear!

    g'morning...:)

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  32. Hi Jim;

    g'morning...:)

    ..of course I don't believe, too. that was just pure fiction you know!

    but should i really believe in it, butterfly would be my first choice...:)

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  33. Hello Sandy;

    g'morning....:)

    yes, it is! thanks Sandy! but this is just pure fiction...:)

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  34. very beautifully put thru..nature is the best way to express oneself..isnt it??

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  35. PassionMust;

    g'morning...:)

    yes, it is and that i also really love nature!

    have a nice day!

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  36. Hi PS the Pratsie;

    no more PS De Abb....?

    yes, it is...:)

    miss yah!

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  37. Amazing.. wonderful work.. the best so far on this prompt.. seems coming straight from heart.. :)

    lovely..

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  38. "and belong to you now though through a different world." lovely...and the photo of the butterfly, lovely as well.

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  39. Very sweet take on prompt. An unknown love from some past. Perhaps someday you will both be on the same side of time.

    love, Melanie

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  40. Tumblewords;

    Good morning!

    ...thanks so much!

    :)

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  41. Dear Hope;

    thank you so much, you really appreciated it! Yeah, it really comes from the heart!

    g'morning!

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  42. Dear Hope;

    thank you so much, you really appreciated it! Yeah, it really comes from the heart!

    g'morning!

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  43. Dear Hope;

    thank you so much, you really appreciated it! Yeah, it really comes from the heart!

    g'morning!

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  44. Hi Deowriter;

    yeah, it's really beautiful...:)

    thanks to you!

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  45. Hello Cassiopheaia,

    ...thanks dear, and I really wish that someday, I will be with my beloved!

    g'morning!

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  46. Gautami,

    thanks so much...:)

    what do you mean by Kill Word Verification?

    have a nice daY!

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  47. Such a delicate drifting of souls in this sunlit garden! And who but the butterfly, symbolic of transformation, to lite on your outstretched hand. Lovely.

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  48. Hi Gabrielle;

    thanks so much!

    we always hear butterflies as symbolic of reincarnation that's why i thought it to write that way!

    thanks so much!

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  49. Hi Gabrielle;

    thanks so much!

    we always hear butterflies as symbolic of reincarnation that's why i thought it to write that way!

    thanks so much!

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  50. What a lovely poem- it speaks of such hope~ thanks!

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  51. Hi Patti;

    ...thanks to you also!

    have a nice day!

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